🇵🇭 || demigod | shadowhunter | divergent | potterhead | tribute | grisha | and all the others i forgot to mention
Lovely story and amazing cover also. I enjoyed reading the book. It was such a light and fun read, a break from all the heavy, stressful books I've had in the past few days. I'm amazed with how you weaved it simply that's not too boring or dull for the readers. All in all, well done!
Hello! I only read until the 5th chapter. There were minor errors. I can't point all of it out though. To save time, you could use an online editing site like prowritingaid.com to help you ^.^
You could use a comma instead of a period :)