I'm a person who likes both to read and write in my free time as well as draw on occasion, even if I suck at it. I hope to become at least a half decent author, and I hope that you will like my work.
Aside from the speech thing, the story is well written and flows well too. There's a large cast of characters who are all portrayed well
The story is extremely well written and conveys a really powerful atmosphere and tone, making me feel uncomfortable. It really manages to set up characters really well, giving us the motivations and thoughts of the characters, and provide strange, contrasting disconnects that just makes me feel uncomfortable. I think that's intentional.
The story is well written and well paced with some really amazing character writing. The author definitely gets better as the story goes on with this.
The story is well written and well paced with interesting and well defined characters. The setting is also really cool, especially with how the story starts out in the beginning and there's a fair bit of tension there between the characters as well.
The work is well written and well paced with a compelling main character and plot. The work is still in it's early stages, but it's shaping up to be good.
The story is well written and the author is really good at filling scenes up with tension to make up for the lack of screen time for characters in the work so far.
Firstly, I have to say that the cover of your work is absolutely gorgeous! The writing in the work is good with only minor punctuation mistakes. The characterisation and drama of all the characters are the main strengths here.
The story is immensely well written with the only criticism being that some paragraphs need to be broken up to become smaller. I have to say, the first line of the book description made me laugh.
The story has a unique premise and is well written and well paced. In some moments as well, it gets almost sickly with how fluffy it gets.
The story is well written and well paced with some amazing character writing right from the beginning. You can really feel what the main character feels so good job author!
The story is well written with amazing characterisation work done through the character's dialogue and descriptions.
The setting and premise is very unique and is executed extremely well too. The writing is amazing and the character drama and motivations just suck you in and leave you begging for more.
If the author name didn't tip you off, there's R-18 content in this novel. There's amazing characterisation work done off dialogue alone by the author and the pacing is well executed and the work is well written.
The setting is detailed and interesting and the story is also well written. The main issue I see is with paragraphing with some of the longer paragraphs just needing to be split up.
The story is well written with the author improving as the work goes on. The characters and their dynamics are interesting and fun to read as well.
The story is pretty solidly written, apart from a few issues with capitalisation that gets resolved quickly as the story keeps going on. The pacing is good with solid characters and dialogue.
The writing is actually really, really good with the dialogue being the best parts of the work. The story development and pacing is also good with interesting characters in the setting.