Keep doing what you doing I love what you've written. I hope you continue to slowly get crazier with how powerful the MC is and what he builds.
I know this is a little late considering how far along the story is by the time of me making this comment but the mC really should Max out science as much as he can before going to the doctor to get implants so he can tinker with them and make them better.
This so far is almost perfectly written as far as I can tell. the MC has power that is while overpowered not very overpowered as it relies on energy source that while renewable is not entirely easy to get ahold of. Not only that he has a relatively linear If not slowly becoming exponential power increase. And the characters so far have responded with in reason. I commend you author you have done very well. I hope to see this story continue for a long time.
I like the concept of this and don't care that there's only one chapter. just write some more So I can Binge read it. Thank you have a nice day
the second he steps outside the vault and exposed to the natural/unnatural radiation
I like what you've done with the story so far and I hope to see it continue. Later in the story I do hope you slow down and add more detail as so far you have sped through The parts that everyone covers in their fanfic before they immediately drop it So please do continue the story
yes more of this. maybe some more internal conflict with Natasha getting a symbiote and you can't tell me a human man turned symbiote isn't looking to get his tentacles wet. but other than those two things keep doing what your doing.
Well now that I have read up to what you've got. You writing so far is kind of fast pace but that is understandable considering that MC is in the middle of training montage/growing up. An in DC nothing really happens until Bruce is batman. Just make the chapter longer and add more detail And you'd have improved your writing by a lot.
I haven't read your story but just theBlacklight virus being used in a story is something I've been waiting for, for a while. I'll wright real reviews in the comments So please just keep writing.
there are a lot of things the mc could do with his position in time. my suggestion is to go to the locations of fallout 4 and new Vagas. why in New vagas Mr house is in need of help and he is in possession of advanced science/an army. and in fallout 4 you have the institute which is several of the smartest scientists.
Not much in the way of a complaint or criticism toward your writing but I do think Jean should have more stuff written on her status and death should be like "oh so it's her" Considering Phoenix force is kind of her opposite. It also does make sense if nothing is said because death is trying to watch a show. but I personally don't like it as much.