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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw1d
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    Keep doing what you doing I love what you've written. I hope you continue to slowly get crazier with how powerful the MC is and what he builds.

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    Steel Waste
    Video Games · Niggross
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    stink_claw1d
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    I know this is a little late considering how far along the story is by the time of me making this comment but the mC really should Max out science as much as he can before going to the doctor to get implants so he can tinker with them and make them better.

    Ch 157 Saving Private Ry-Ranger Morales
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    Steel Waste
    Video Games · Niggross
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw4d
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    This so far is almost perfectly written as far as I can tell. the MC has power that is while overpowered not very overpowered as it relies on energy source that while renewable is not entirely easy to get ahold of. Not only that he has a relatively linear If not slowly becoming exponential power increase. And the characters so far have responded with in reason. I commend you author you have done very well. I hope to see this story continue for a long time.

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    Dc Warlock
    Anime & Comics · Heavens_Monarch
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    stink_claw5d
    Replied to Granville4554

    yeah but that could be taken care of by telling him about it and slipping in a percentage of the cash I mean he is broke.

    Ch 35 Stupid Gravitonium...
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    Swallowing The Spider (Linear)
    Anime & Comics · GutsyRipper
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw5d
    Posted

    I like the concept of this and don't care that there's only one chapter. just write some more So I can Binge read it. Thank you have a nice day

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    Devil Merchant
    Fantasy · itsrhythm
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw5d
    Commented

    could make spider man brand Kevlar. There have been many actual real life experiments to make spider silk into bullet proof vests.

    Ch 35 Stupid Gravitonium...
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    Swallowing The Spider (Linear)
    Anime & Comics · GutsyRipper
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw5d
    Commented

    Does anyone else think he should just show up with his army of monsters and kill everyone including Argus and then whenever they question him about why. he says argus was banished from arario we didn't say where to.

    Ch 20 Lord Argus
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    I woke up in DanMachi world with Solo Leveling system?
    Anime & Comics · Retack
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw6d
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    I mean I thought it was pretty true to form. The only thing is I think it should have been in the big senate area with all the seats Instead of in the office. And A little more detail on how they escaped. Otherwise yeah it's good.

    Ch 30 The Senate
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    BEING AN EMPEROR IN STAR WARS
    Anime & Comics · outerself19
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw13d
    Commented

    yes more this

    Ch 42 The First Step: Painting the sky red. Part- 3
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    One Step At A Time (DanMachi)
    Anime & Comics · An_Imperfectionist
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw13d
    Commented

    the second he steps outside the vault and exposed to the natural/unnatural radiation

    [A/N: I still haven't decided when so let me know your thoughts]
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    I reincarnated into the Fallout Universe!
    Video Games · Unholy_Student
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw14d
    Posted

    I like what you've done with the story so far and I hope to see it continue. Later in the story I do hope you slow down and add more detail as so far you have sped through The parts that everyone covers in their fanfic before they immediately drop it So please do continue the story

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    Star Wars: Reborn in the Star Wars Universe
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw18d
    Commented

    I personally think the MC should act like pacman for the larger fragments of the crystal laying around to see if he gets more superpowers/bloodline stuff

    Ch 28 Quest?
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    Rise Of The Worm Sovereign
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw19d
    Posted

    yes more of this. maybe some more internal conflict with Natasha getting a symbiote and you can't tell me a human man turned symbiote isn't looking to get his tentacles wet. but other than those two things keep doing what your doing.

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    Marvel Super Venom
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw19d
    Commented

    haha. "um hey there... that magic you just saw... well you didn't and your insane if you think you did"

    Ch 20 Future plans
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    Prince Of Waste. Reborn into Fallout as a Molag/Deathclaw
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw20d
    Commented

    Well now that I have read up to what you've got. You writing so far is kind of fast pace but that is understandable considering that MC is in the middle of training montage/growing up. An in DC nothing really happens until Bruce is batman. Just make the chapter longer and add more detail And you'd have improved your writing by a lot.

    Ch 10 dungeon run ( 4 )
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    Dead Man's virus: PROTOTYPE
    Anime & Comics · yami_
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw20d
    Posted

    I haven't read your story but just theBlacklight virus being used in a story is something I've been waiting for, for a while. I'll wright real reviews in the comments So please just keep writing.

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    Dead Man's virus: PROTOTYPE
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw21d
    Commented

    there are a lot of things the mc could do with his position in time. my suggestion is to go to the locations of fallout 4 and new Vagas. why in New vagas Mr house is in need of help and he is in possession of advanced science/an army. and in fallout 4 you have the institute which is several of the smartest scientists.

    Ch 19 The reality.
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    Prince Of Waste. Reborn into Fallout as a Molag/Deathclaw
    Video Games · So_Aap_Jay
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    stink_claw21d
    Commented

    good writing and gags but the chapters are so short its like.....

    Ch 19 20. Life isn't fair!
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    That Time I Reincarnated Into A Pig!
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    stink_claw21d
    Commented

    Not much in the way of a complaint or criticism toward your writing but I do think Jean should have more stuff written on her status and death should be like "oh so it's her" Considering Phoenix force is kind of her opposite. It also does make sense if nothing is said because death is trying to watch a show. but I personally don't like it as much.

    Ch 8 X-Men?
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    Marvel: Angel of Death
    Movies · Amon_The_Fisherman
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  • stink_claw
    stink_claw22d
    Replied to baedog_73
    Ch 3 Hunting/ Selinas Reaction
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    A Ghoul In Dc
    Movies · baedog_73
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