(Droped) This Young Master Have Had Enough

Noice one[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] MY Fellow men of culture I recommended this to all of you if you Don't read this novel you are going waste your 99% lifespan, The story is great and readable With GREAT WAIFUS

Accordimg to the first 4 chapters this story is a bit different from the usual cliche. Hope u write more and this book become a success. Btw the start is really good.

Well This îs an Awesome Read with Well Thought characters and Best Waifus So I would Recomend This To Who ever Pays Visiting Here Author îs Good Guy Who tries To Be as interactive as possible with us. Just Keep it up and Dont Change Much Cuș I Can See potential in You kid This from now on You are renamed As Kyle_Waifumaker.

This novel is one of the best I've read in a long time. Destroys patterns and the main character is also smart and not a slave to the system. But the novel is very difficult to comprehend and the main character is psychologically broken. I won't continue reading this but I'm glad I saw it

This is one of the most unique and interesting Novels I’ve read. The power system is different and characters feel more than cardboard cutouts, and the story Also flows in a way that it doesn’t depend on cliches and plot devices. Unfortunately it’s almost as if the story is too unique. It has too much going on at one time that it becomes confusing, in the first 10 chapters you don’t know if it’s going to be a generic urban fantasy or a sci-fi drama. It overwhelms the reader with to many components of the story at the same time. I think the author focused too much on trying to be different that he/she bit off more than they can chew and it becomes confusing. For the first chapters of the story, it feels like there isn’t a plot and thing just happens; so as a reader and hard to follow the story. The reader isn’t allowed to infer what’s going on in the story and understand the emotions of the MC and other characters because the author jus tells us, it’s almost as if we are not reading story but a summary of things that happened. In conclusion I fell the author bit more than he can chew and didn’t give a chance for the plot to flow naturally. Oddly enough I kinda wish the author took a more cliched and generic approach and build upon it so we can, as readers can understand the story better. Sometimes it’s better to take a well trodden path and build on it than to build your own and forget to enjoy the scenery on the way. Best if luck and to the author ✍️ hope you keep writing this great novel

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definitely one of the best novels as a start well executed author was actully listening to the readers that was a super plus point.. was gonna read this after my exam.. sad it dropped..or you can say "the author had enough"

Interesting read, I quite enjoyed it ..................................................................................................................................

not what you'd expect. both the title and synopsis are basically bait, and only work for the first 10 or so chapters. then things start going out of hand, ridiculous reveals keep happening that we barely understand and before we get explanations, other reveals happen and those before get shoved out of the way and only get some basic explanations if you read between the lines. overall, to enjoy this you must have your brain online (you must think while reading this! no brain-dead reading where you forget things you dont like!), and thus see its faults, which is both a pro and a con for me. still ill give it 5 stars just because how different it is from others of its sort. and remember, dont believe what is "established", whether its by mc's or narrator's perspective.

This novel has no plot. It is like author wrote unrelated events, then combined into story.

Love this! Easily one of the better novels on here, despite the authors peculiarities (his obsession with one liners after long pauses) they have created a really solid world and nice reading experience. Overall it’s a very fun read and I am expecting it to get even better! Although i do have some complaints but they’re more about my preferences than the authors writing quality. The only technical thing I could say about this is that the author should be careful not to subconsciously or otherwise become consumed by the Chinese fiction way of writing, fellow cultiva- Ahem, anyways, some vibes I got were very manuah-y or whatever you’d call that spice. Its not an entirely technical complaint and also more of my preference but sudden vibe changes do ruin the pace and already built atmosphere of what you’ve got! Also I’d like to see how the waifus progress! Hopefully they do get an important role after their power ups and development. I’ve seen too many stories where the girls around the mc are immortals with one in a million years bodies only for it to become completely pointless and a waste of time because the Mc has become so much more stupidly powerful than them, where their progress might as well not even matter. Although so far you have done really well with them, and because of it i am even more invested in how they’ll become later on! I hope the Mc doesn’t lose the need to depend on their capabilities because so far you’ve done really well with it. I also like you writing more about the emotional and mental aspect of things and their relationships. (But perhaps you can hold back on those paragraphs of whatever the mc tries to do to sound wise and experienced? It’s probably one of the only things I actually found a bit hard to read so far.) Ah, also I gave about three stars because although the story is a good read it has the potential to be even better! Don’t rush and trust the process, it’s usually better that way! So many authors that get told their stories are good end up rushing things to get even more praise or whatever and ruin the good they had! But also don’t waste chapters please! Well, those date chapters were really nice though 😩👍

Good Novel Nice Balance of Humor and Seriousness

It started badly, but the author managed to pick it up. Its plot is interesting. There are too many twists. It makes it difficult to guess. A classic tragic hero. It still manages to be unique in its class. I believe it has great untapped potential.

All i want to say is that read this novel and experience a villian who changed his own fate by opposing system and the world will. with his own efforts he created his own unique identity in a novel world. so give this novel a try and i guarantee that you will read a unique type of this genre novel.

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i really didn't expect much at first but i have to admit this was really a hidden gem the first 20 chapters are so good that even if the story turned trush afterward the story would still be good the author really has talent for taking a cliché and adding a twist the changes the whole thing.

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A great novel so far, although there are a few grammar mistakes, they aren't too many and quality-wise is definitely in the upper part of the spectrum. The plot is more deep/important than many other novels that share the same kinda setting. Characters are all but 2-dimensional although their backstory is sometimes explained in a somewhat rushed way. A lot of the world background is in the first additional chapters, which I prefer since this way there are a lot fewer info dumps.

I love the novel story development and world building is great and I absolutely love the MC and how well it is written

The best reading I've had in a long time. It was something that was quite a departure from the normal cliche, the waifu also felt nice. The author did great in this history