This is one of the most unique and interesting Novels I’ve read. The power system is different and characters feel more than cardboard cutouts, and the story Also flows in a way that it doesn’t depend on cliches and plot devices. Unfortunately it’s almost as if the story is too unique. It has too much going on at one time that it becomes confusing, in the first 10 chapters you don’t know if it’s going to be a generic urban fantasy or a sci-fi drama. It overwhelms the reader with to many components of the story at the same time. I think the author focused too much on trying to be different that he/she bit off more than they can chew and it becomes confusing. For the first chapters of the story, it feels like there isn’t a plot and thing just happens; so as a reader and hard to follow the story. The reader isn’t allowed to infer what’s going on in the story and understand the emotions of the MC and other characters because the author jus tells us, it’s almost as if we are not reading story but a summary of things that happened. In conclusion I fell the author bit more than he can chew and didn’t give a chance for the plot to flow naturally. Oddly enough I kinda wish the author took a more cliched and generic approach and build upon it so we can, as readers can understand the story better. Sometimes it’s better to take a well trodden path and build on it than to build your own and forget to enjoy the scenery on the way. Best if luck and to the author ✍️ hope you keep writing this great novel
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Thanks for the review, I really motivates me to do even better! About your points, I do agree with them. In the beggining I was just doing it for the sake of doing it, so I didn't have a plot to begin with. Though it changed somewhat in the later chapters. But you do have valid points. Thanks for reading and for the review! 🍷😎
Your welcome, this was just a review of the early chapters, later on it totally improves💯✍️
Kyle_Kingsmaker:Thanks for the review, I really motivates me to do even better! About your points, I do agree with them. In the beggining I was just doing it for the sake of doing it, so I didn't have a plot to begin with. Though it changed somewhat in the later chapters. But you do have valid points. Thanks for reading and for the review! 🍷😎
Glad to hear it, but your review did help me in finally deciding to do some editing of the early chapters, something which I have been dragging on until now, so thanks. 🍷😎
BadDad_201:Your welcome, this was just a review of the early chapters, later on it totally improves💯✍️
what's up with the upload schedule I started to read it and like it but don't want to wait a month for new chapters or if you drop it
Kyle_Kingsmaker:Glad to hear it, but your review did help me in finally deciding to do some editing of the early chapters, something which I have been dragging on until now, so thanks. 🍷😎
Just stopped for a while, but I won't be dropping. I'm doing some final details on my second novel and should be back by the day after tomorrow. Btw, thanks for reading and for the feedback! 🍷😎
Cody_:what's up with the upload schedule I started to read it and like it but don't want to wait a month for new chapters or if you drop it
Kyle_Kingsmaker:Just stopped for a while, but I won't be dropping. I'm doing some final details on my second novel and should be back by the day after tomorrow. Btw, thanks for reading and for the feedback! 🍷😎
