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Re_shin
Re_shinLv32yr
2022-11-05 18:18

It started badly, but the author managed to pick it up. Its plot is interesting. There are too many twists. It makes it difficult to guess. A classic tragic hero. It still manages to be unique in its class. I believe it has great untapped potential.

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Kyle_Kingsmaker
Kyle_KingsmakerAuthor

Thanks for the review! It really motivates me to do even better! About the start, it's true, even I think it is bad or barely passable. For the plotwists, most of them are due to certain unexplicable things being present and that I'll be using them for the story, hence I need to explain them for it to not be simply thrown at the reader's face and say to them: "accept and deal with it". However, it still stands that I'm doing several for just he novel's beginning. But all in all, I hope you're having fun reading because I'm having by writting. Once again, thanks for the review, it really helps me. 🍷😎

Re_shin
Re_shinLv3

Dude, your story has many features that make it stand out on this platform. I am having a lot of fun while reading. I will take care to read and leave comments until it is locked. Unfortunately I have no condition for more. I hope you continue to write without losing your motivation. I wish you success.

Kyle_Kingsmaker:Thanks for the review! It really motivates me to do even better! About the start, it's true, even I think it is bad or barely passable. For the plotwists, most of them are due to certain unexplicable things being present and that I'll be using them for the story, hence I need to explain them for it to not be simply thrown at the reader's face and say to them: "accept and deal with it". However, it still stands that I'm doing several for just he novel's beginning. But all in all, I hope you're having fun reading because I'm having by writting. Once again, thanks for the review, it really helps me. 🍷😎
Kyle_Kingsmaker
Kyle_KingsmakerAuthor

Thanks man. And in case of I ever receiving a contract, I'll still maintain my schedule and interaction with you guys. Once again, thanks for reading and for your feedback! 🍷😎

Re_shin:Dude, your story has many features that make it stand out on this platform. I am having a lot of fun while reading. I will take care to read and leave comments until it is locked. Unfortunately I have no condition for more. I hope you continue to write without losing your motivation. I wish you success.
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