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Dark_crow
Dark_crowLv42yr
2022-10-26 20:16

Accordimg to the first 4 chapters this story is a bit different from the usual cliche. Hope u write more and this book become a success. Btw the start is really good.

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Dark_crow
Dark_crowLv4

Excuse the typo

Kyle_Kingsmaker
Kyle_KingsmakerAuthor

Thanks for the review! I'm really grateful for it. As for me keep writing it, I'm really having fun writing it and I intend to continue writing. Once again, thanks for the review. 😊

Supsup
SupsupLv13

Little question so the Mc is 35 years old ?

Kyle_Kingsmaker:Thanks for the review! I'm really grateful for it. As for me keep writing it, I'm really having fun writing it and I intend to continue writing. Once again, thanks for the review. 😊
Kyle_Kingsmaker
Kyle_KingsmakerAuthor

Physically, no, he is 20. Mentally is also no, he is way over it.

Supsup:Little question so the Mc is 35 years old ?
Jheydi327
Jheydi327Lv13

Yoww many love interest ?

Dark_crow
Dark_crowLv4

presently 4

Jheydi327:Yoww many love interest ?
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BadDad_201
BadDad_201Lv14

This is one of the most unique and interesting Novels I’ve read. The power system is different and characters feel more than cardboard cutouts, and the story Also flows in a way that it doesn’t depend on cliches and plot devices. Unfortunately it’s almost as if the story is too unique. It has too much going on at one time that it becomes confusing, in the first 10 chapters you don’t know if it’s going to be a generic urban fantasy or a sci-fi drama. It overwhelms the reader with to many components of the story at the same time. I think the author focused too much on trying to be different that he/she bit off more than they can chew and it becomes confusing. For the first chapters of the story, it feels like there isn’t a plot and thing just happens; so as a reader and hard to follow the story. The reader isn’t allowed to infer what’s going on in the story and understand the emotions of the MC and other characters because the author jus tells us, it’s almost as if we are not reading story but a summary of things that happened. In conclusion I fell the author bit more than he can chew and didn’t give a chance for the plot to flow naturally. Oddly enough I kinda wish the author took a more cliched and generic approach and build upon it so we can, as readers can understand the story better. Sometimes it’s better to take a well trodden path and build on it than to build your own and forget to enjoy the scenery on the way. Best if luck and to the author ✍️ hope you keep writing this great novel

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