Item: (Droped) This Young Master Have Had Enough
Rating: 5
Author: Neydomus

NeydomusLv122yr

2023-03-18 05:26

not what you'd expect. both the title and synopsis are basically bait, and only work for the first 10 or so chapters. then things start going out of hand, ridiculous reveals keep happening that we barely understand and before we get explanations, other reveals happen and those before get shoved out of the way and only get some basic explanations if you read between the lines. overall, to enjoy this you must have your brain online (you must think while reading this! no brain-dead reading where you forget things you dont like!), and thus see its faults, which is both a pro and a con for me. still ill give it 5 stars just because how different it is from others of its sort. and remember, dont believe what is "established", whether its by mc's or narrator's perspective.

(Droped) This Young Master Have Had Enough

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Kyle_KingsmakerAuthor

Thanks for the review! It really motivates me to do even better! Sorry about the revelations things, I overdid it a bit while doing it. Thanks for reading, and I'm happy you liked it. 🍷😎

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