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mao_zi
mao_ziLv42yr
2023-03-24 10:44

i really didn't expect much at first but i have to admit this was really a hidden gem the first 20 chapters are so good that even if the story turned trush afterward the story would still be good the author really has talent for taking a cliché and adding a twist the changes the whole thing.

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Kyle_Kingsmaker
Kyle_KingsmakerAuthor

Thanks for the review, it really motivates me to do even better! I'm glad you liked it! Though, I hope the story continue to be enjoyable to you, because this is one of the reason why I write: to write fun things. Once again, thanks for reading and for the feedback! 🍷😎

mao_zi
mao_ziLv4

it already reached the level when it's so good that i am afraid to finish it good

Kyle_Kingsmaker:Thanks for the review, it really motivates me to do even better! I'm glad you liked it! Though, I hope the story continue to be enjoyable to you, because this is one of the reason why I write: to write fun things. Once again, thanks for reading and for the feedback! 🍷😎
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BadDad_201
BadDad_201Lv14

This is one of the most unique and interesting Novels I’ve read. The power system is different and characters feel more than cardboard cutouts, and the story Also flows in a way that it doesn’t depend on cliches and plot devices. Unfortunately it’s almost as if the story is too unique. It has too much going on at one time that it becomes confusing, in the first 10 chapters you don’t know if it’s going to be a generic urban fantasy or a sci-fi drama. It overwhelms the reader with to many components of the story at the same time. I think the author focused too much on trying to be different that he/she bit off more than they can chew and it becomes confusing. For the first chapters of the story, it feels like there isn’t a plot and thing just happens; so as a reader and hard to follow the story. The reader isn’t allowed to infer what’s going on in the story and understand the emotions of the MC and other characters because the author jus tells us, it’s almost as if we are not reading story but a summary of things that happened. In conclusion I fell the author bit more than he can chew and didn’t give a chance for the plot to flow naturally. Oddly enough I kinda wish the author took a more cliched and generic approach and build upon it so we can, as readers can understand the story better. Sometimes it’s better to take a well trodden path and build on it than to build your own and forget to enjoy the scenery on the way. Best if luck and to the author ✍️ hope you keep writing this great novel

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