Reincarnated as a dragon egg in DxD with a Fate System!

I have to say, I have been reading a few reviews on this novel and to say I am not disappointed would be a huge understatement. Sure, the first few chapters were totally unbearable with Mc's perversive personality and dumbness, the story itself took a turn for the better. Our Mc seems to have grown up, he acts and behaves like a proper and mature person, he is rational and cold about situations and doesn't give in to emotions very easily which is a good thing. Surely the biggest improvement has been his behavior around the opposite gender, in the first few chapters, his personality was just like a horny dog and nothing more. It really was unbearable and made my want to drop the novel but I didn't and continue to read it to this day. The reviews state the truth but they aren't up-to-date, this story has progressed a lot since the start and the author's style of writing has also seemed to mature quite a lot. The character description of Azazel is also spot-on and interesting, the direction of the story is also interesting so is the upcoming Holy-grail arc. I personally would like people to once again read this novel and update their reviews, it doesn't give a good impression to readers who only read the bad beginning and drop the story. The author-san can maybe edit those chapters and also delete those reviews after asking the readers to post a much-updated review. This novel has the potential to be a 4.5 or 4.6-star novel, it is very well written and designed. I hope people do update their review after reading my post. Thank you for your time guys..... Stay safe and stay inside.... Diseda~....

This story has a horrible beginning like omg I hated reading through all of that but once you get past it about 40 chapters in, this story really takes off the author does an amazing job in developing everything naturally and it’s not nearly as bad of quality as it originally was just give it a try and slog past the beginning

3 Star only just for a interesting plot and Cause of author's non stop perversing and sexual innuendo on a 10 years old girl in ch22 +. I don't care if it's a joke. In fact that what made it worst. The fact that everyone seems to find it funny is just disturbing. Sure.. It's a fic, a fic with a Fate elements and Slight fan service. not a fic about a dragon (who has a mental age of an ***** man) that wanna have s*x with a 10 years old kid. Once or twice is a frown, more than that is just disgusting. I swear more perversion on 10 years old kid and this novel needs dropping and reporting. Call me killjoy or whatever. Perversing on a kid is just wrong...

Jan 23 2020. As of now this is in top 3. My question is; how the fck did that happen!? The mc is stupid. The scene are cliche. Most of all almost all the scene is annoying to the point when a joke comes up you dont even know if its funny or not cuz youll just get annoyed at what happen before the joke. Guess author is doing his magic again.. just like what he did in his other fate system ff. Vote spam. Ill give you a 4 for the stability update atleast.

It's quite sad that only reviews with high rating appear in the mobile version , this novel atleast at the start is a blatant plagiarism of reborn as a dragon egg , and even when it's not the mc it's not the sharpest tool in the shed and thinks with his lower body a lot

This is one of the most stupid stories I've ever read. The MC was absurdly stupid and has been from the get go. And seriously, training with a bow as a dragon? So retarded. He didn't hunt and increase his power and evolve at all over an entire year. Are you actually serious? He made no progress whatsoever in his levels compared to him evolving twice in a week. And the chapters are just ungodly annoying to read. Starting from about chapter 25, all it is is conversation after conversation. 10 chapters alone just talking to the old man in his head and then the rest just had a year time skip with talking and more talking about him training and summoning Mordred. I can't believe you're actually holding extra chapters on Patreon. Who the hell would pay to see this?

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I took the advice of the previous review and forced myself through the first 40 chapters and i have to say, i should have dropped it way earlier. The mc certainly transformed alright, he went from from a weak dumb pervert to a weak passive wimp. He went from being undesirable#1 to undesirable#2. He literally let's characters weaker than him insult him to the face and take in like a bitch. He openly admits he have 0 pride, which for me= 0 self respect=beta mc. Something i find even more irritating than previous one. Now that's not to say the fic is bad or anything, if u can ignore the mc than this is one of the best fics in terms of writing/quality on this site. This is the only reason I tried to atleast skim through but sadly even that came to fail. I skipped ahead to Percy Jackson part but wished i hadn't. The author overpowers the demi-gods by so fucking much i just screamed in frustration. Author, dude, u do realise the demigods could literally be buried 6 feet under by a single well place sniper shot or grenade right? How the hell is Thalia more powerful than a fucking dragon king with a fucking system? Whatever I've already given up hope of this fic. No matter how great the quality is, i cant torture myself willingly.

Well, I thought it would be an interesting novel like "The Hunter Academy", but the disappointment was huge, good luck with that novel should have continued with "The Hunter Academy", because that is the most stupid thing I have seen, I have ever seen in my life what is worse in human beings and, believe me, it is difficult to find such a naive MC, so, where was he living? I think you removed all his memories and left him with only 5 years old, because if he has all the memories this is one of those MCs who would be "cuckold" his whole life and would never find out.

I really want to read on believe me but I couldn't it was so good until author think that other people know about system was a good idea no it's not the novel lost its taste and I can't read it anymore

So, it's an eh fanfiction. Like a lower low quality isekai, but in a dxd with weapons from fate, eventually multiverse. Infodumps were annoying as they comprise a large chunk of the story so far. Mc is not badass, hes not amazing, and people look down on him. He has a system but doesnt do much with it, he makes less progress during timeskips than the first couple weeks he was alive. It's one of those fanfics where "higher powers" are at work and he has his part to play. He seems unable to control himself from saying stupid ****, or actively defend himself from insults. So I guess it really is like an isekai. Overall if you like those isekais with slow growing characters that get insulted, dont defend themselves, but they'll eventually get there then I guess this might be for you if all you wanted was that but with elements from different animes.

can't say much but this is one of the worst fic in the app... I wonder how it got such good ratings, must be author deleting poor ratings to increase the rating of overall. MC is one of the most illogical being in story ( he could talk shit to a multiverse god but cowers in the face of a puny vampire, is called dragon king but suck major dick and cowers from demigod...u know that they could die from a single normal BB gun bullet, ryt?) and the Author attitude toward critics that points out his mistakes and his replys toward those people are such that I get nauseated just by reading such story's from such a person.. And also the author has copied the OG fanfic of ' reborn as dragon egg' with minor adjustments but call it as his own story, just think for a moment how did such a person dropped from his mother's vagina...she must be ashamed of author, and his attitude that she must have committed suicide.jk. but anyway ... WARNING: DON'T READ THIS NOVEL, IT HAS WIMPY, BITCHY, BETA MC, PERVERTED AND WEAK MC THAT HAS A MAJOR 8 TH GRADE SYNDROME.

Had high hopes Is obvious that mc isnt really mc but a beta Japanese guy that had edge Lord plugin... ............................................

Expectation: fate dxd crossover Reality: slash dog percy jackson boring sh1t oof!🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱

story is sort of interesting tho it is likely going to be another unfinished smut. The biggest beef i have with the story is that it plagiarizes the actual reincarnated as a dragon egg story start almost word for word. i do not condone theft of intellectual property even if its for a smut fanfic. at least try to be original or develop your own story. Needless to say the quality is above average for this site and seems to be relatively stable update wise

Well.. i thought its a good novel.. But all went down the drain after chapter 22.. I still continue to read.. till chapter 26.. But thats it.. i cant read it anymore.. This whole higher being mission is bullsht.. Mc can act haughty in front of the GOD.. with all capital.. the being that can destroy him with just a flick of finger.. But when he is in front of the vampire.. he afraid.. The being that only 3 or 4 times stronger than he is.. If i read till chapter 21.. i can easily rate this book 4.. But after that.. it went down.. super fast.. Well.. if anyone want to read.. just read till chapter 21.. And try and stop.. If you like higher being plot and so on.. Then continue reading.. If not stop.. Good luck author..

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I had high hopes for this story - but my disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined. Lets start off by saying the MC has the IQ of a Gecko, however the Gecko probably beats him in common sense. The story is basically a copy of Reincarnated into Dragon Egg but just with a DxD background - there is very little originality in the story and what is original generally makes you want to rip out your own spine due to frequent paradoxes and lack of logic. The only good things so far, is the premise and the quantity of released chapter. Read at your own risk.

I have 3 problems I'd like to voice not just about this novel but a common problem I've seen in other novels 1• If you are reincarnating an adult into a child with all its memories then he should have other qualities that resemble adult that isn't just being perverted. 2• To all authors thinking of writing status/system novels stop showing the status for every little improvement. Just give a small paragraph of the improvement and get back to the story. No one wants a chapter with the Status taking up all of the chapters. Give me a status page when there has been a great achievement. 3• Stop pasting information from the Internet cause it's an unnecessary amount, dumb it down to your own words so that we don't have just a huge chapter of information instead of actual story development.

i only read till chapter 9 and drop this novel, MC is fucking stupid, my brain cells were reduced to a minimum.............................................