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VictorRust2410
VictorRust2410Lv24yr
2020-10-08 05:47

I took the advice of the previous review and forced myself through the first 40 chapters and i have to say, i should have dropped it way earlier. The mc certainly transformed alright, he went from from a weak dumb pervert to a weak passive wimp. He went from being undesirable#1 to undesirable#2. He literally let's characters weaker than him insult him to the face and take in like a bitch. He openly admits he have 0 pride, which for me= 0 self respect=beta mc. Something i find even more irritating than previous one. Now that's not to say the fic is bad or anything, if u can ignore the mc than this is one of the best fics in terms of writing/quality on this site. This is the only reason I tried to atleast skim through but sadly even that came to fail. I skipped ahead to Percy Jackson part but wished i hadn't. The author overpowers the demi-gods by so fucking much i just screamed in frustration. Author, dude, u do realise the demigods could literally be buried 6 feet under by a single well place sniper shot or grenade right? How the hell is Thalia more powerful than a fucking dragon king with a fucking system? Whatever I've already given up hope of this fic. No matter how great the quality is, i cant torture myself willingly.

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I have to say, I have been reading a few reviews on this novel and to say I am not disappointed would be a huge understatement. Sure, the first few chapters were totally unbearable with Mc's perversive personality and dumbness, the story itself took a turn for the better. Our Mc seems to have grown up, he acts and behaves like a proper and mature person, he is rational and cold about situations and doesn't give in to emotions very easily which is a good thing. Surely the biggest improvement has been his behavior around the opposite gender, in the first few chapters, his personality was just like a horny dog and nothing more. It really was unbearable and made my want to drop the novel but I didn't and continue to read it to this day. The reviews state the truth but they aren't up-to-date, this story has progressed a lot since the start and the author's style of writing has also seemed to mature quite a lot. The character description of Azazel is also spot-on and interesting, the direction of the story is also interesting so is the upcoming Holy-grail arc. I personally would like people to once again read this novel and update their reviews, it doesn't give a good impression to readers who only read the bad beginning and drop the story. The author-san can maybe edit those chapters and also delete those reviews after asking the readers to post a much-updated review. This novel has the potential to be a 4.5 or 4.6-star novel, it is very well written and designed. I hope people do update their review after reading my post. Thank you for your time guys..... Stay safe and stay inside.... Diseda~....

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