3 Star only just for a interesting plot and Cause of author's non stop perversing and sexual innuendo on a 10 years old girl in ch22 +. I don't care if it's a joke. In fact that what made it worst. The fact that everyone seems to find it funny is just disturbing. Sure.. It's a fic, a fic with a Fate elements and Slight fan service. not a fic about a dragon (who has a mental age of an ***** man) that wanna have s*x with a 10 years old kid. Once or twice is a frown, more than that is just disgusting. I swear more perversion on 10 years old kid and this novel needs dropping and reporting. Call me killjoy or whatever. Perversing on a kid is just wrong...
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The Mc is only thinking with his dick all the time but, it went tooooo far when they kept on sexualising a 10 year old.
Baby that cries just because people have a different sense of humor your the kind of guy that can't deal with or comprehend something that doesn't suit your tastes
Save your **** into your mouth weirdo. Just because we can't stomach such 'humor' while you're so en amoured, understanding and comprehending about it doesn't make you anywhere superior... I don't mean to be offensive. But the fact that mr.author was one of the first few people who liked this review (which i'm thankful for) and understood it. while your vehemently expressing your pro-child perversion humor doesn't make you any less weirder
Did I once claim to be superior in anyway? No so get that delusion out of your head. The author seems like a pretty cool guy so of course he would like a negative review it's letting him know what kind of people he has to cater to. You are way too sensitive of a human being if you can't take one dark humor joke I do not know how you survive in the real world if you that sensitive towards things you don't like. You are talking as if I condone the action for laughing at the joke which is just stupid dark humor usually stems from people who would rather laugh at serious problems that are out of their control rather than stressing over them.
The moment you call people names was the moment your elevating yourself you as*. Always putting himself on the highground while saying stuff like we can't comprehend it and just don't read and **** like a smartass. Fyi, It's because we comprehend it that we find the joke distasteful. And sorry for being senstive about some sentenceS and more that includes '10 years old p*ssy*' along the lines... And just because we complain about it doesn't gave you the right to act all smart and **** when barely anyone agrees with you. While my reviews seems too stupid for you it atleast garner 12 individual and still increasing who find that stuff distasteful. so don't act like finding pedo jokes funny is some sort of real life survivalist necessities cause irl its not. In fact sensitive people tend to survive and live longer lifes compare to people insensitive enough and so incensed that he always argue when some people try to complain to show their point for their dislike cause he find people complaining stupid.
Juar because people agree with you doesn't make you right most of germany agreed to beings nazi's didn't make them right if anything your the one acting assuming you can completely understand my mindset after a few message this all started because I told you that if the humor doesn't suit you taste drop it then you insulting my sense of humor so stop acting like a victim
Whatever man. Can't care to read anymore. I'm not acting like a victim cause you complained about me complaining. You told me to just drop it and stop complaining. The first time i complained you told me to stop reading it and the moment i review you start belittling my intelligence. This getting tiring tbh. I don't like CHILD Dark humor (PERIOD) I posted a review about it (PERIOD) Then you came arguing and justifying that me disliking the humor stupid. What's it to you? What will you get justifying that me not finding child dark humor as funny as stupid and nothing else. Cause i don't really see what you wanted to happen here. I have my taste and you have yours. I complain, so what? Why are you acting like some justice guy and a hired goon as if it's something you must do? I dislike the humor and i complain about it. I like the plot so why should drop it!? Why does it matter if i complain or not cause I'm not seeing your point here.
If you like the plot so much why did you give it a 3 star review for ONE joke?
Because it isn't just ONE. the whole upper part of that chapter and lower part of the previous chapter has it and probably some future chaps as well. I rate it that cause world building, character design and that humor isn't up to par yet thus a three star. It's interesting but not there at the 5 star yet. You can't just 5 star every book you like cause you like a certain aspect of it.
That humor part is your opinion so that's true to you but what do you mean character design and world building you do realise you are reading a Fanfiction right?
The Dragon Mc, some Oc's and Characters introduced in the DxD novel but wasn't fleshed out are considered as his works and also if characters already fleshed out but isn't working/acting the same way as their originals are part and considered as character design minus. As for world building there are some dxd fics that has world that is way beyond the original or more explored than the OG and some are incredibly good so I'm a bit bias about it. This fic however is on universal scale cause of those god's introduce so it is already beyond the OG but wasn't as clean as the OG. So three stars.
Cool I see your point. Can I have the names of some of those dxd fics?
Sure... They're crossover though but good read among the other xover I've read so far. Holy man of the church creek (FSN/DXD) (INCOMPLETE) A Demon among Devils (P3/DXD) (DROPPED PROBABLY) Devil Ninja (Naruto/DXD) (INCOMPLETE)
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u should not touch fanfiction section man u are sad
I dont really care about the pedo joke, I just dont think it's either funny or bad. It just simply doesnt cause any reaction out of me, no idea why you are so worked up about it; in the end it's just a joke. Dark humor is about joking about dark topics, murderer, racism, pedos, nazi, races, etc... If you dont like it then it's fine, but when you condemn other people for liking it, then you are simply an idiot.
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No idea why you're so work up about his comment. In the end a joke is only a joke if its funny. If you condemn people for expressing their own thoughts, then you are simply an idiot.
Not gonna lie, when you mentioned the 10 year old I thought of Raphtalia
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