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Flat_Moon
Flat_MoonLv55yr
2020-04-25 03:52

I have 3 problems I'd like to voice not just about this novel but a common problem I've seen in other novels 1• If you are reincarnating an adult into a child with all its memories then he should have other qualities that resemble adult that isn't just being perverted. 2• To all authors thinking of writing status/system novels stop showing the status for every little improvement. Just give a small paragraph of the improvement and get back to the story. No one wants a chapter with the Status taking up all of the chapters. Give me a status page when there has been a great achievement. 3• Stop pasting information from the Internet cause it's an unnecessary amount, dumb it down to your own words so that we don't have just a huge chapter of information instead of actual story development.

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Cattyblinder
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Legendary_Person
Legendary_PersonLv5

I have to say, I have been reading a few reviews on this novel and to say I am not disappointed would be a huge understatement. Sure, the first few chapters were totally unbearable with Mc's perversive personality and dumbness, the story itself took a turn for the better. Our Mc seems to have grown up, he acts and behaves like a proper and mature person, he is rational and cold about situations and doesn't give in to emotions very easily which is a good thing. Surely the biggest improvement has been his behavior around the opposite gender, in the first few chapters, his personality was just like a horny dog and nothing more. It really was unbearable and made my want to drop the novel but I didn't and continue to read it to this day. The reviews state the truth but they aren't up-to-date, this story has progressed a lot since the start and the author's style of writing has also seemed to mature quite a lot. The character description of Azazel is also spot-on and interesting, the direction of the story is also interesting so is the upcoming Holy-grail arc. I personally would like people to once again read this novel and update their reviews, it doesn't give a good impression to readers who only read the bad beginning and drop the story. The author-san can maybe edit those chapters and also delete those reviews after asking the readers to post a much-updated review. This novel has the potential to be a 4.5 or 4.6-star novel, it is very well written and designed. I hope people do update their review after reading my post. Thank you for your time guys..... Stay safe and stay inside.... Diseda~....

ShuraTheDestroyer
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