I had high hopes for this story - but my disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined. Lets start off by saying the MC has the IQ of a Gecko, however the Gecko probably beats him in common sense. The story is basically a copy of Reincarnated into Dragon Egg but just with a DxD background - there is very little originality in the story and what is original generally makes you want to rip out your own spine due to frequent paradoxes and lack of logic. The only good things so far, is the premise and the quantity of released chapter. Read at your own risk.
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LIKEMy guy, the only notable changes in what I have read so far is just adding the DxD world. You may very well have changed it later on, but the introduction and up to chapter 20 is like a student copy and pasting information onto an essay and then changing all the words to synonyms. Additionally, I HIGHLY suggest you use grammarly as there are many typos and spelling mistakes that further lower the quality. Just from the amount of chapters I can see you are trying - but if you want to make a good fanfic you need quality not just quanitity.
I use Grammarly, if I have spelling mistakes is not my fault (it is, I know. But I have confidence on Grammarly.)
But Grammarly doesn’t fix pronouns such he, she, him, and her. U should really fix those mistakes since people literally point them out to u in chapter/paragraph comments.