SageOfSins

Nope, imma Outta here.

Cut back on those "...". And please edit these older chapters incase for new readers.

Was wondering, why I seem to have seen the epilogue and title before. Then the first chapter, with the overly narcissistic MC and the introduction of his name, I remember having read this dump of a fic and having dropped it because of it being more of info dump then a fic. Like 3-5 he rants on about fate series. Again I'm out, let this review act as an balance for all those idiotic 5 star bot reviews.

Eat milk? Like wtf?

I'm out.

Couldn't agree more! Two to three chapters to flesh out character is ok but 12 chapters just to run an errand. Like bro, Do you think your self Tolkien?

Unnecessary filler.

Please, don't indulge these sort comments. Most of better writers on WN are either bullied into writing useless chapters and plots just to satisfy some of these idiotic harem clans or anti-villian mania. Just do your own thing, no need to reply to every craven asking for attention. Write your plots regardless of what someone's demand, if your story is good eventually hundreds and thousands will naturally follow it, and based on these dozen of chapters, I believe you will get there faster than we both can predict. So good luck.

Et tu?

Nahh! Too much AI editting.