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Lv145yr
2020-05-01 13:13

This story has a horrible beginning like omg I hated reading through all of that but once you get past it about 40 chapters in, this story really takes off the author does an amazing job in developing everything naturally and it’s not nearly as bad of quality as it originally was just give it a try and slog past the beginning

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Lector1apresurado
Lector1apresuradoLv4

Historia que le falta protagonista o mejor dicho uno que se está formando

omegawerewolf1
omegawerewolf1Lv3

The thing is I shouldn’t have to read 40 chapters to get good story

Immortal_Boomstick
Immortal_BoomstickLv5

then dont read the 40 chapters the author is probably learning while writing if you want a book well thought of and not a on the spot novel made because of inspiration and curiosity go to a fully completed one since they probably have edited and changed things in the beginnings ill even recommend a few 1:Chrysalis 2:The Legendary Mechanic 3:Lord of the Mysteries 4:kill the hero 5:second life ranker 6:death mage doesn't want a fourth time 7:everyone else is a returnee (completed) 8:Lord of the Mysteries (contains mostly mystery and supernatural elements) 9:Rebirth in Bleach (updates randomly can wait a month or more) and these are the ones i can think of right now,

omegawerewolf1:The thing is I shouldn’t have to read 40 chapters to get good story
omegawerewolf1
omegawerewolf1Lv3

Chrysalis is a very good novel and I am currently reading that right now I’ve been reading it long before you posted this comment and I’m currently on chapter 15 It’s genuinely a good novel. Btw What were we talking about

Immortal_Boomstick:then dont read the 40 chapters the author is probably learning while writing if you want a book well thought of and not a on the spot novel made because of inspiration and curiosity go to a fully completed one since they probably have edited and changed things in the beginnings ill even recommend a few 1:Chrysalis 2:The Legendary Mechanic 3:Lord of the Mysteries 4:kill the hero 5:second life ranker 6:death mage doesn't want a fourth time 7:everyone else is a returnee (completed) 8:Lord of the Mysteries (contains mostly mystery and supernatural elements) 9:Rebirth in Bleach (updates randomly can wait a month or more) and these are the ones i can think of right now,
Immortal_Boomstick
Immortal_BoomstickLv5

we or rather i was pointing out that you shouldn't waste time with this novel if you cant read 40 chapter without waiting and instead focus on some i sent you since they are good and some not in this site

omegawerewolf1:Chrysalis is a very good novel and I am currently reading that right now I’ve been reading it long before you posted this comment and I’m currently on chapter 15 It’s genuinely a good novel. Btw What were we talking about
RexVector
RexVectorLv11

Can you recommend me on good harem novel/fanfic? Even romance if you can.

Immortal_Boomstick:we or rather i was pointing out that you shouldn't waste time with this novel if you cant read 40 chapter without waiting and instead focus on some i sent you since they are good and some not in this site
Immortal_Boomstick
Immortal_BoomstickLv5

Since there arent very many good harems but the onesi think are good are rebirth in bleach (fanfic) Dragonborn saga (fanfic) Night ranger These are the ones i know that aren't shit for my personal taste thought night ranger is a bit different since it doesn't have much romance until later and has some wuxia perks.

RexVector:Can you recommend me on good harem novel/fanfic? Even romance if you can.
Immortal_Boomstick
Immortal_BoomstickLv5

and forgot everyone else is a returnee is also a harem

RexVector:Can you recommend me on good harem novel/fanfic? Even romance if you can.
Slycerr
SlycerrLv12

it's kind of sad how the harem genre developed if you needed to ask if you could also have romance in the fic. the point of a harem is that you have relationships with multiple women/men, and I'm pretty sure you should have a romance in a relationship. But instead harem stories just became a trophy collecting. sorry if this came out of nowhere but i just had the urge to say it.

RexVector:Can you recommend me on good harem novel/fanfic? Even romance if you can.
Omnidoa
OmnidoaLv6

I meant grammar not grammer lol auto correct

Immortal_Boomstick:then dont read the 40 chapters the author is probably learning while writing if you want a book well thought of and not a on the spot novel made because of inspiration and curiosity go to a fully completed one since they probably have edited and changed things in the beginnings ill even recommend a few 1:Chrysalis 2:The Legendary Mechanic 3:Lord of the Mysteries 4:kill the hero 5:second life ranker 6:death mage doesn't want a fourth time 7:everyone else is a returnee (completed) 8:Lord of the Mysteries (contains mostly mystery and supernatural elements) 9:Rebirth in Bleach (updates randomly can wait a month or more) and these are the ones i can think of right now,
ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

Thats it? Man i got to 190 something in 3 Days!

omegawerewolf1:Chrysalis is a very good novel and I am currently reading that right now I’ve been reading it long before you posted this comment and I’m currently on chapter 15 It’s genuinely a good novel. Btw What were we talking about
BeardedReader
BeardedReaderLv5

I thought that was harem in the way the chicks liked him but he ignores them all because "reasons" does that change later on or am I mixing them up?

Immortal_Boomstick:and forgot everyone else is a returnee is also a harem
Immortal_Boomstick
Immortal_BoomstickLv5

he does ignore theam but in the very late chapters he accepts theam all for reasons.

BeardedReader:I thought that was harem in the way the chicks liked him but he ignores them all because "reasons" does that change later on or am I mixing them up?
DarkSouls
DarkSoulsLv3

Parese que la novela esté buena después del 40 estoses voy a leer la

Gill_XD
Gill_XDLv14

I'm not gonna lie I was mega super doubt full of this being good after reading the first chapters but, I gotta say he does a 180. Thanks to this I comment I decided to give it a chance and danm it's like a different book, and I like it! Good job Author and thanks ! 😊

Enlightened_Clown
Enlightened_ClownLv4

yo

Immortal_Boomstick:Since there arent very many good harems but the onesi think are good are rebirth in bleach (fanfic) Dragonborn saga (fanfic) Night ranger These are the ones i know that aren't shit for my personal taste thought night ranger is a bit different since it doesn't have much romance until later and has some wuxia perks.
Enlightened_Clown
Enlightened_ClownLv4

good

Immortal_Boomstick:then dont read the 40 chapters the author is probably learning while writing if you want a book well thought of and not a on the spot novel made because of inspiration and curiosity go to a fully completed one since they probably have edited and changed things in the beginnings ill even recommend a few 1:Chrysalis 2:The Legendary Mechanic 3:Lord of the Mysteries 4:kill the hero 5:second life ranker 6:death mage doesn't want a fourth time 7:everyone else is a returnee (completed) 8:Lord of the Mysteries (contains mostly mystery and supernatural elements) 9:Rebirth in Bleach (updates randomly can wait a month or more) and these are the ones i can think of right now,
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Legendary_Person
Legendary_PersonLv5

I have to say, I have been reading a few reviews on this novel and to say I am not disappointed would be a huge understatement. Sure, the first few chapters were totally unbearable with Mc's perversive personality and dumbness, the story itself took a turn for the better. Our Mc seems to have grown up, he acts and behaves like a proper and mature person, he is rational and cold about situations and doesn't give in to emotions very easily which is a good thing. Surely the biggest improvement has been his behavior around the opposite gender, in the first few chapters, his personality was just like a horny dog and nothing more. It really was unbearable and made my want to drop the novel but I didn't and continue to read it to this day. The reviews state the truth but they aren't up-to-date, this story has progressed a lot since the start and the author's style of writing has also seemed to mature quite a lot. The character description of Azazel is also spot-on and interesting, the direction of the story is also interesting so is the upcoming Holy-grail arc. I personally would like people to once again read this novel and update their reviews, it doesn't give a good impression to readers who only read the bad beginning and drop the story. The author-san can maybe edit those chapters and also delete those reviews after asking the readers to post a much-updated review. This novel has the potential to be a 4.5 or 4.6-star novel, it is very well written and designed. I hope people do update their review after reading my post. Thank you for your time guys..... Stay safe and stay inside.... Diseda~....

ShuraTheDestroyer
ShuraTheDestroyerLv4
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