3 Star only just for a interesting plot and Cause of author's non stop perversing and sexual innuendo on a 10 years old girl in ch22 +. I don't care if it's a joke. In fact that what made it worst. The fact that everyone seems to find it funny is just disturbing. Sure.. It's a fic, a fic with a Fate elements and Slight fan service. not a fic about a dragon (who has a mental age of an ***** man) that wanna have s*x with a 10 years old kid. Once or twice is a frown, more than that is just disgusting. I swear more perversion on 10 years old kid and this novel needs dropping and reporting. Call me killjoy or whatever. Perversing on a kid is just wrong...

Jan 23 2020. As of now this is in top 3. My question is; how the fck did that happen!? The mc is stupid. The scene are cliche. Most of all almost all the scene is annoying to the point when a joke comes up you dont even know if its funny or not cuz youll just get annoyed at what happen before the joke. Guess author is doing his magic again.. just like what he did in his other fate system ff. Vote spam. Ill give you a 4 for the stability update atleast.

This is one of the most stupid stories I've ever read. The MC was absurdly stupid and has been from the get go. And seriously, training with a bow as a dragon? So retarded. He didn't hunt and increase his power and evolve at all over an entire year. Are you actually serious? He made no progress whatsoever in his levels compared to him evolving twice in a week. And the chapters are just ungodly annoying to read. Starting from about chapter 25, all it is is conversation after conversation. 10 chapters alone just talking to the old man in his head and then the rest just had a year time skip with talking and more talking about him training and summoning Mordred. I can't believe you're actually holding extra chapters on Patreon. Who the hell would pay to see this?

It's quite sad that only reviews with high rating appear in the mobile version , this novel atleast at the start is a blatant plagiarism of reborn as a dragon egg , and even when it's not the mc it's not the sharpest tool in the shed and thinks with his lower body a lot

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I took the advice of the previous review and forced myself through the first 40 chapters and i have to say, i should have dropped it way earlier. The mc certainly transformed alright, he went from from a weak dumb pervert to a weak passive wimp. He went from being undesirable#1 to undesirable#2. He literally let's characters weaker than him insult him to the face and take in like a bitch. He openly admits he have 0 pride, which for me= 0 self respect=beta mc. Something i find even more irritating than previous one. Now that's not to say the fic is bad or anything, if u can ignore the mc than this is one of the best fics in terms of writing/quality on this site. This is the only reason I tried to atleast skim through but sadly even that came to fail. I skipped ahead to Percy Jackson part but wished i hadn't. The author overpowers the demi-gods by so fucking much i just screamed in frustration. Author, dude, u do realise the demigods could literally be buried 6 feet under by a single well place sniper shot or grenade right? How the hell is Thalia more powerful than a fucking dragon king with a fucking system? Whatever I've already given up hope of this fic. No matter how great the quality is, i cant torture myself willingly.

Well, I thought it would be an interesting novel like "The Hunter Academy", but the disappointment was huge, good luck with that novel should have continued with "The Hunter Academy", because that is the most stupid thing I have seen, I have ever seen in my life what is worse in human beings and, believe me, it is difficult to find such a naive MC, so, where was he living? I think you removed all his memories and left him with only 5 years old, because if he has all the memories this is one of those MCs who would be "cuckold" his whole life and would never find out.

I really want to read on believe me but I couldn't it was so good until author think that other people know about system was a good idea no it's not the novel lost its taste and I can't read it anymore

So, it's an eh fanfiction. Like a lower low quality isekai, but in a dxd with weapons from fate, eventually multiverse. Infodumps were annoying as they comprise a large chunk of the story so far. Mc is not badass, hes not amazing, and people look down on him. He has a system but doesnt do much with it, he makes less progress during timeskips than the first couple weeks he was alive. It's one of those fanfics where "higher powers" are at work and he has his part to play. He seems unable to control himself from saying stupid ****, or actively defend himself from insults. So I guess it really is like an isekai. Overall if you like those isekais with slow growing characters that get insulted, dont defend themselves, but they'll eventually get there then I guess this might be for you if all you wanted was that but with elements from different animes.