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ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv41yr
2024-04-16 10:10

i never felt so annoyed on how this was i knos its a friendly super hero fic but taking all the annoyance of peter old life like the bullying and non violence is just annoying since its not peter from the comics about the same only diffrence is he has an harem and a stronger and not even op level or none of that just not my cup.of tea but if any of my disagrements yall like this will probably be for you

Spider-Man Mayhem

Shadow_D_Monarch3
4.3
299 Chs

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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

I haven't read this yet, I know the MC is reborn when he is young so he had many years to change his life, didn't he defend himself from his bullies? I really find it illogical that this happens, he has a lot of time to train or even practice some martial art at a young age.

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Lilith_vermilion
Lilith_vermilionLv3

don't trust someone reviews to much..he didn't get bully at all ,he also learn martial arts at Young age with gwen

Gabichu_Yeah:I haven't read this yet, I know the MC is reborn when he is young so he had many years to change his life, didn't he defend himself from his bullies? I really find it illogical that this happens, he has a lot of time to train or even practice some martial art at a young age.
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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

So the review is troll?

Lilith_vermilion:don't trust someone reviews to much..he didn't get bully at all ,he also learn martial arts at Young age with gwen
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Lilith_vermilion
Lilith_vermilionLv3

yes , Literally if you read..you can see mc and Gwen learn martial art.. Not only that , but both of them also create so many high tech at young age ,

Gabichu_Yeah:So the review is troll?
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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

I just read 30 chapters and it's true, the guy in the review is lying, thanks for clearing that up, I was about to skip reading this.

Lilith_vermilion:yes , Literally if you read..you can see mc and Gwen learn martial art.. Not only that , but both of them also create so many high tech at young age ,
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Lilith_vermilion
Lilith_vermilionLv3

no problem 👍🏻

Gabichu_Yeah:I just read 30 chapters and it's true, the guy in the review is lying, thanks for clearing that up, I was about to skip reading this.
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GrimReeFer
GrimReeFerLv1

His nickname is penisparker and gets footballs thrown at him, he's defo bullied 🤣

Lilith_vermilion:don't trust someone reviews to much..he didn't get bully at all ,he also learn martial arts at Young age with gwen
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world_domination
world_dominationLv5

well Spider-Man's got to be the bigger guy after all if he was to bítçh slap those guys with the footballs with his actual strength they would literally turn into me paste on the wall

GrimReeFer:His nickname is penisparker and gets footballs thrown at him, he's defo bullied 🤣
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asaade9999
asaade9999Lv3

what's the used of learning martial arts when his still getting bullied penisparker

Lilith_vermilion:don't trust someone reviews to much..he didn't get bully at all ,he also learn martial arts at Young age with gwen
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TyrantTron335
TyrantTron335Lv13

Whether spiderman kill or not is not a problem but sparing his enemy like green goblin, Doctor Octopus, Kingpin is frustrating, that's why dark fanfiction. Also is it harem please

1yr

SeniorTrouble
SeniorTroubleLv4

The author killed Peter Parker’s parents because he couldn’t step away one step from the canon and create something of his own, something that has logic, and not “I’m Peter Parker and I was reborn as a genius, I know the Marvel plot, but I don’t know.” that Peter Parker's parents will die! the author has no creativity, only following the canon with minor changes in the form of a harem, I guess the whole meaning of rebirth is lost, and therefore the meaning of ff by marvel!

1yr
Quake_Midaro
Quake_MidaroLv14

Just another AINcreating Spider-Man carbon copy fic if you looming for a refreshing take or a decent fic then skip this it's not worth the time wasted to read another poorly thought out copy paste fic

1yr
virusONtimez
virusONtimezLv12

NO HERAM BONK No HERAM no HERAM it’s lame and gay and also for loners BOOOO

1yr
Kennedy_Johnson_1791
Kennedy_Johnson_1791Lv2

Here we go the pitfall most Spider-man story's fall into to many spider-people first Felicia then it spirals out of control from there that and too many jarring switches in prospective

11mth
Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

The writing is good but I don't like the story. It feels too wish fulfillmenty, idk if that's a word but you know what I mean. Characters felt bland, updates are great. World BG is fine.

1yr
Niloy_Das
Niloy_DasLv4

It's a wish fulfillment type novel. So for any serious readers, it will break the immersion again and again due to the absurd number of times simple common sense is ignored in the story. You can try it if you don't believe me. 😔

1yr
RedX43
RedX43Lv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
KnifeEarEnthusiast
KnifeEarEnthusiastLv13

Good Lord, the dialogue! I appreciate that this is an amateur writer, but please stop watching anime. That's not how people talk. No one has called someone else a rogue on this side of the millennium. No waiter has ever said "It shall be done" to a pair of high school kids.

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