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RedX43
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2023-12-11 11:30

Its one of the best Spider-Man FF, I have read. Trust me I Always Thought Why Can't Spidey make his own AI for Assistant if he that Smart Enough, There You Have it. & I Hope there is no something strange relationships here 🤞So far so good...[Review at Chap 13]

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OrdealOfMc
OrdealOfMcLv5

dude, almost half spiderman SI make an AI,

RedX43
RedX43Lv4

man, really? thats AI! Well I Enjoyed so who cares? at least author did write half right?

OrdealOfMc:dude, almost half spiderman SI make an AI,
Humbuub
HumbuubLv4

They always make an AI, but they wanna "surpass" Jarvis and create a lifelike AI Surprise surprise, they made an AI with a personality of a kid. Freaking annoying most of the time.

Quake_Midaro
Quake_MidaroLv14

Thanks for letting me know it's a carbon copy trash Spider-Man fic the constant AI to surpass Jarvis or focus on being everything except Spidey just get's annoying glad I didn't waste time reading this garbage

RedX43
RedX43Lv4

well, even I dropped after 15 or so Chapters

Quake_Midaro:Thanks for letting me know it's a carbon copy trash Spider-Man fic the constant AI to surpass Jarvis or focus on being everything except Spidey just get's annoying glad I didn't waste time reading this garbage
Kaizer11
Kaizer11Lv1

Lots of comics series's Spider-mans made AI and used Tech, e.g. Superior Spider-man (otto in Peter's body), Miguel (Spider-man 2099) etc. It's just writers wanna make Spidey seem, struggling and become hero to save the day in front of all odds, that's why they don't make his character grow in tech field but just give him some moral BS of Power and Responsibility. Other wise, he has high iq level and really brilliant and, in some particular timelines he's owner of Parker industries. I really dissatisfied with those comic writers, as even the new series didn't improve spidey but just made him more like unlucky who's always left behind. I understand that at starting, Stan Lee created him to be symbol for hope and struggling to survive. But now, He became a laughing gag who just makes jokes on villans and ends up joke himself. Really a BEST CHARACTER CONSISTENCY. p.s. sorry for ranting, I don't know why but i just had urge to tell someone.

ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

bro no offense this is one of the worst spiderman fic i've read only brightside is the updates

RedX43:man, really? thats AI! Well I Enjoyed so who cares? at least author did write half right?
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