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It's just too unrealistic, it doesn't even make sense.

She bet her purity on a few earthly possessions? I'm sorry author but that's utterly ridiculous and far to unbelievable to even pretend its possible, what a joke 😂

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Nami would join the Straw Hat Pirates. No... No she wouldn't, she only set sail because of arlong, the MC stopped that, theirs no reason at all for nami to meet the strawhats, who ever wrote this is dumb.

In chapter 7 the MC just stands still and lets himself get beaten and nearly killed, he's strong enough to instantly end the situation and instead does this nonsense.

Faerie Feast (10): Be really good at cooking. Pass again. I really doubt being a good cook is some kind of incredible seduction power. I remember reading this in the past and thinking you were a cuck, now I think you're a retard..

Mm, no idea if you know this or not, but the story is up to chapter 50 on qq, author just sucks at uoloading it anywhere else. questionablequesting .com You gotta make an account and verify the email to be able to see any of the storys on there though.

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Why would they become wary of him having power? You've written this as if he's not part of the family, so weird.

This story follows the anime and not the Ln, anyone that knows the difference should know to avoid this now but some don't, for example the anime is why everyone hates rias because she lets issei die, same thing happens in this fanfic, it's not canon and you should avoid any fanfic you find that follows the anime