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SeniorTrouble
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2024-02-15 16:56

The author killed Peter Parker’s parents because he couldn’t step away one step from the canon and create something of his own, something that has logic, and not “I’m Peter Parker and I was reborn as a genius, I know the Marvel plot, but I don’t know.” that Peter Parker's parents will die! the author has no creativity, only following the canon with minor changes in the form of a harem, I guess the whole meaning of rebirth is lost, and therefore the meaning of ff by marvel!

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AlastorGF
AlastorGFLv1

Y exactamente según vos como los salvarías ? que quede claro que cuando tenia esa edad no tenia poderes y no había nada que pudiera hacer para que lo tomaran enserio

ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

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AlastorGF:Y exactamente según vos como los salvarías ? que quede claro que cuando tenia esa edad no tenia poderes y no había nada que pudiera hacer para que lo tomaran enserio
Kalameet_
Kalameet_Lv1

use the google translate moron

ACHILLES:Translate
p3d0_Man
p3d0_ManLv4

AlastorGF:Y exactamente según vos como los salvarías ? que quede claro que cuando tenia esa edad no tenia poderes y no había nada que pudiera hacer para que lo tomaran enserio
p3d0_Man
p3d0_ManLv4

Kalameet_:use the google translate moron
Unstable_One
Unstable_OneLv5

Can't copy paste text in the app. So lots of people are unable to use google translate.

Kalameet_:use the google translate moron
Kalameet_
Kalameet_Lv1

Auto translated from google settings.

Unstable_One:Can't copy paste text in the app. So lots of people are unable to use google translate.
Unstable_One
Unstable_OneLv5

Are you talkimg about Chrome? I, and many others, use the WebNovel app.

Kalameet_:Auto translated from google settings.
Ibnor_Khalid
Ibnor_KhalidLv4

pangai hau ya. sik sume urang apat makei gugel translate. nyaman jak anok urang bodo. nang hau jak lah pande. ye ku madah, nang sukati palak ninek nya lok ilek2 jak nganok urang. sikde pande nok berbudi bahse. nakpe kah reti cam ey. If you got tree, child, grandmother and talking, in that sentences, congratulation, you've just been trolled by whatever you're using to translate it.

Kalameet_:use the google translate moron
Kirito_Kirigaia
Kirito_KirigaiaLv5

AlastorGF comment "And exactly how would you save them? Let's be clear that when he was that age he had no powers and there was nothing he could do to make them take him seriously."

OyenKw
OyenKwLv13

Kalameet_:use the google translate moron
CLOX
CLOXLv4

he was a fuckin kid when his parents die, tf are you crying about

SRM2811
SRM2811Lv4

From where I see , it hasn't been confirmed that the parents are dead . In some story they were just taken away by hydra .

DaoistHeartAttack
DaoistHeartAttackLv3

He is a grown as* man in the body of a child, its no excuse of 'he is a child and can't do anything'. Thats bull crap.

CLOX:he was a fuckin kid when his parents die, tf are you crying about
CLOX
CLOXLv4

tf are you yapping about HE'S LIKE 6 YEARS OLD, even if he is older mentality wise, that doesn't change the fact that not only no one will believe him and he has no powers at all, please fucking explain what he could've done as a child without his parents calling him crazy or thing he's being childish or making a joke, please explain I wanna know wtf you think he can do

DaoistHeartAttack:He is a grown as* man in the body of a child, its no excuse of 'he is a child and can't do anything'. Thats bull crap.
DaoistHeartAttack
DaoistHeartAttackLv3

Stop the cap, you are just yapping and meat riding the author, just how incompetent could the MC be that he couldn't even save his parents even though he knows about it. 'He is just a child','he couldn't do anything', are just excuses. I've seen other MCs do much more even while being more disadvantaged that this poor excuse of a MC.

CLOX:tf are you yapping about HE'S LIKE 6 YEARS OLD, even if he is older mentality wise, that doesn't change the fact that not only no one will believe him and he has no powers at all, please fucking explain what he could've done as a child without his parents calling him crazy or thing he's being childish or making a joke, please explain I wanna know wtf you think he can do
CLOX
CLOXLv4

so tell me how he can do it then, give me a fuckin reason, a kid Peter Parker with a adult soul, no powers, no sway, a FUCKING child, with no proof of what will happen to his parents, NOTHING, if he somehow helped his parents survive There will be no reason for him to be spider man, NONE where's the motivation, Where's the drive, there is none think logically, if he saved his parents there will be no point of spider man, end.Of.STORY.

DaoistHeartAttack:Stop the cap, you are just yapping and meat riding the author, just how incompetent could the MC be that he couldn't even save his parents even though he knows about it. 'He is just a child','he couldn't do anything', are just excuses. I've seen other MCs do much more even while being more disadvantaged that this poor excuse of a MC.
world_domination
world_dominationLv5

the problem is having Peter's parents alive is inconvenient for the story for one you don't know really what Peter's parents were like some comics has flashbacks of them even somewhere they're alive but the fact is it's far better to have Aunt May and Uncle Ben they're very established you know their personality and it gives a reason for Peter to live in Queens to go to the school he does and all that jazz I think you would prefer reading a story or writing a story about someone who's not Peter Parker and you have an entire OC family and MC of your own making

DRShikimori
DRShikimoriLv3

I know the author is looking for canon, but honestly I think his reason for the MC not being able to do it while other MCs are able to is not very valid, mainly because these MCs practically say straight out that there is an adult in a child's body and the other adults don't even react, some child MCs say future information and the adults just ask something and don't even go into detail about why a child knows these things, these MCs are pure plot armor, I know that the whole story is controlled by the plot, but in my opinion a story should at least deceive a little and add a touch of realism, without it seeming like the author is blatantly helping the MC.

DaoistHeartAttack:Stop the cap, you are just yapping and meat riding the author, just how incompetent could the MC be that he couldn't even save his parents even though he knows about it. 'He is just a child','he couldn't do anything', are just excuses. I've seen other MCs do much more even while being more disadvantaged that this poor excuse of a MC.
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