ACHILLES

you lied.

🐐

good if the chapters wouldn't take so long and giving pointless chapters like 8 chapters of the same thing back to back, it's awful

updates too damn slow and giving pointless chapters when it does come

brooo, why is the chapss so short, especially now

Emanuel fics always a 10/10 till he makes a crazy 180 turn and falls to a 7/10, then he clutches up again, (excluding the Kung fu panda fic, he burnt that,) Looking forward to the surprise

allg man, take your time irl should always come first,

10/10 so far just sad that the end seems so close

u gotta mark all r18 chapters, which makes it better. Also, a lot of information or writing that isn't needed, was a waste of some chapters imo

Cool fic just hate the way author went about it, villian and possessive Mc, well hope this helps ppl understand it Mc is not a hero nor a Anti hero from what I got.