shouldn't his clan be damn near instinct i don't know if author knows that but there should be only as much as 10 lower left due to the kekai genkai illusions turning them into demons themselves everything seems to be too good for the mc right now...

Okay Ty

is he an oc? or from Featr the walking dead? its been awhile

The mc is very unlikable read for 30 chaps left came and reread and its horrendous mc is too nice author saying thats polite theres a line between polite and low which the mc act like and he's more of a butler

kinda hatin the story right now he already gotten contact by the millitary and guns and it doesn't seem to feel like the walking dead/FTWD As of now but hopefully it'll get better its starting to not

Very great so far just instead of baki i'll perfer kengan ashura or an combined world as kengan ashura has everything better than baki in my opnion since in baki most fights are just he swung speed of light or too strong to move or feel like water or animal

Story just slow so far after this he won't meet Twd or FTWD for awhile so i will wait for more chaptera but other than that all good

Coo chapter so is Asuka becoming the yandere or smthin just from the last worda she said probanly jealousy then if he ignores i think

Morningstar_Novel saved me from reading this🙂‍↕️

Wat????

Well just don't drop thr fic i don't really care bout this harem or romance either is good for a story and if people has an problem with the harem but wanted an diffrent Fl then idk just GL figuring that problem

biggest selling ever was good for 30 chaps then author started making some of the stupidest crap and ideas which selled the whole thing the only great thing is the writting other than that he sold the fic

Its way worse than i expected not my type of story adding Oc/Au world minato seeming not as strong as you'll hoped slow progression like not needed slow seeming 1000 chapter slow before it ends not my type of fic

Great book ìdea he just went at it the wrong way similer to his kuroko fic of always hiding his power which doesn't work in action like these and irritates the hell out of readers adding Ocs to an anime with a variety of characters and flashbacks But good writing needs to work on action scenes which is due to him holding back alot but as of now since flashback ended it got alot better as he clarified the abillity but he still is holding back and is on an whole bunch of words with not much to show for it as i doubt he can beat netoro as he said but hopes it get better or author moves on from these always holding back fics and all secretive for 200 chapters like the kuroko fic but it seems to be imporving.[718]

Alright i mean you can try to relax more and go along with the chimera arc soon and just recite the other cast not your ocs not much of a fan of them or care enough untill you got an more clear rhythem and the story is finally starting to get good and more readable as your begining and flashbacks almost sold the whole fic as we didn't really have a clear idea of his strangth other than an gojo move which failed for gojo but keep the great work as it seems the fic is starting to get saved

Whats the original?

Àuthor doesn't seem to read feèdback as he doesn't to listen or show any acknowledgemeñt

hmm alright im cool between 1-2 With an Hxh fic love the work you do on your fics

This is up there for best blue lock fic but its going down as the gap between kira and the cast ain't widing also he focus on the other character too damn much author please fix these soon as im seeing this starting to happen more and more

Author please answer this but it seems kira is not creating an gap anymore and you can say they all improving due to his supperiority but even with barou-Nagi-Rin they all haven't made any where near close results except yoruichi(Mc Thats why) So please don't keep making it like this before your fic starts to die or lose reasonbility just lower the speed of the other cast growth to more of the manga atleast...