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Humbuub
HumbuubLv41yr
2024-01-10 13:49

The writing is good but I don't like the story. It feels too wish fulfillmenty, idk if that's a word but you know what I mean. Characters felt bland, updates are great. World BG is fine.

Spider-Man Mayhem

Shadow_D_Monarch3
4.2
281 Chs

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david_SP773
david_SP773Lv2

Enserio una ilusión ?quien dice que un mundo donde hay súper héroes, la radiación no daña sino da poderes(excepto morlun) ,ay magia y seres cósmicos capaces de matarte literal con una mala mirada . tendría que ser realista y no surrealista como una ilusion

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TyrantTron335
TyrantTron335Lv13

Whether spiderman kill or not is not a problem but sparing his enemy like green goblin, Doctor Octopus, Kingpin is frustrating, that's why dark fanfiction. Also is it harem please

1yr

SeniorTrouble
SeniorTroubleLv4

The author killed Peter Parker’s parents because he couldn’t step away one step from the canon and create something of his own, something that has logic, and not “I’m Peter Parker and I was reborn as a genius, I know the Marvel plot, but I don’t know.” that Peter Parker's parents will die! the author has no creativity, only following the canon with minor changes in the form of a harem, I guess the whole meaning of rebirth is lost, and therefore the meaning of ff by marvel!

1yr
Quake_Midaro
Quake_MidaroLv14

Just another AINcreating Spider-Man carbon copy fic if you looming for a refreshing take or a decent fic then skip this it's not worth the time wasted to read another poorly thought out copy paste fic

1yr
ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

i never felt so annoyed on how this was i knos its a friendly super hero fic but taking all the annoyance of peter old life like the bullying and non violence is just annoying since its not peter from the comics about the same only diffrence is he has an harem and a stronger and not even op level or none of that just not my cup.of tea but if any of my disagrements yall like this will probably be for you

12mth
virusONtimez
virusONtimezLv12

NO HERAM BONK No HERAM no HERAM it’s lame and gay and also for loners BOOOO

1yr
Kennedy_Johnson_1791
Kennedy_Johnson_1791Lv2

Here we go the pitfall most Spider-man story's fall into to many spider-people first Felicia then it spirals out of control from there that and too many jarring switches in prospective

10mth
Niloy_Das
Niloy_DasLv4

It's a wish fulfillment type novel. So for any serious readers, it will break the immersion again and again due to the absurd number of times simple common sense is ignored in the story. You can try it if you don't believe me. 😔

1yr
RedX43
RedX43Lv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Shadowlord96
Shadowlord96Lv4

Good luck author and just like E.I.N give your all in this and for this new novel you can have this

1yr
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