What a pity, the attempt to make comedy with Felicia's interruption ended up destroying the solemn atmosphere that the last chapters had 😮‍💨

No bro, this is not the right way to go, the MC is supposed to be on a revenge mission so inserting Felicia so early in the plot is a bad move, It's anticlimactic, first solve the revenge plot and then if you want you insert Felicia and 500 other characters, but first finish the first plot, instead of being happy to see Felicia like I normally am now I feel annoying because she interrupted the atmosphere that you author had built little by little in the last chapters, bad move...

Soul? I think you're confusing what a symbiote like Venom can do, except if you use some non-canon Venom. But Venom definitely can't see souls or judge if a soul is strong or not.

At least this fanfic is redeemable by finding a minimally reasonable reason to involve the MC in unusual situations, authors are generally horrible at writing these types of plots.

I swear, even before I had the internet I knew Spider Man and his identity, the MC of this fanfic seems to have lived totally isolated from reality, I even dare to say that +90% of the world knows who Peter Parker is

It's an alien with no sense of man or woman, personally I wouldn't mind having one in my body, it's like an AI but better

What is attractive about reincarnation fanfic in series like Marvel or DC are the actions that the MCs take based on the knowledge they have about the franchise, If the MC doesn't know the franchise the fanfic is in, it loses a lot of appeal.

Don't forget the cliché of brain pain 😂😂 pain in the brain, it's ironic when brain surgeries are done with the patient awake and still the patient doesn't feel anything

I would read this if you said that the story takes place in an experiment world that is similar to GOT but with the powers of One Piece, unfortunately the idea of ​​changing everything GOT is a big No for me

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Be honest, what is the possibility of what you propose happening? Close to 0%, you don't have to fool yourself either, we both know he will probably post the lightly edited MTL or raw

They are poor mortals with a mind of poor imagination, you cannot require them to think or use their brain, they want realism in a fanfic of a fictional story HAHA

The plot is very good, but the best thing is the translator's editing work, I almost didn't think it was a Chinese fanfic, spectacular work and thank you very much for taking the time to translate properly.

Thanks for the chapter

Cononically the newspapers in Marvel are all a bunch of ignorant and ïdiøts, JJ is a great example

Thanks for the chapter

There is a lot of "realism" poorly implemented here, as soon as the MC arrives he has a "mental breakdown" in which he cries, screams and punches the air for 20 minutes straight next to Jazmín, apparently the author thought it was a good idea to start his story like this but personally I disliked everything, time to start the story, terrible idea to have the MC have a "realistic" tantrum next to a dying person for 20 minutes only to then abuse that unconscious person with the excuse of "helping her", I think we all know how to give someone unconscious a drink, they teach it on television and any media on the internet, you simply have to lift the unconscious person's upper part and lightly massage their throat so that the liquid passes into the stomach, kisses to give water only work in romantic anime, also I remember that they teach the correct way to give water to someone unconscious in a swimming anime. The MC, is a Japanese with minimal mental resistance Otaku high school student (basically any trash anime protagonist)... I think the author still doesn't know that when you put all those characteristics together you only generate massive repulsion from all normal people, I think I already made my dislike for the protagonist evident, so now I will say the reason why I will stop reading, In this story there is a system, everything is okay but... It has mandatory missions, basically it is a story with an MC slave to the system, plus the mandatory missions have serious punishments which further increases my dislike for the chosen plot by the author, A system that enslaves its MC to compulsorily complete tasks is basically the opposite of what any normal person is looking for, who would want to be enslaved by a higher entity and have to comply with everything that entity wants without the possibility of resisting? I believe that no one

Okay, I guess my effort to continue reading ends here, I hate systems with mandatory missions and also with penalties

Honestly I would stop reading the moment you decided to write the MC's consecutive tantrums, It is unpleasant to read, I think you applied too much realism, so much so that the reaction is exaggerated, it is like what we all imagine would happen in a mental breakdown, I think that making it less realistic would make everything more fluid, realism is a good resource but you can't apply it to the entire fanfic because obviously this is a fanfic

I don't remember much but Midoriya did faint several times just from interacting with other people, at the time it seemed too exaggerated and I couldn't bear to read any more