Gabichu_Yeah

Well, it was good while it lasted, summoning, rituals, a mysterious enemy, I'm 100% sure it's going to go the same way as the Village Chief novel, the first chapters were good but by involving fights and mysteries he only managed to get a few people to read his novel compared to before.

You can always make up an Asian mom from another series and include her in the story if you want.

What happened Haku? There are comments of yours in fanfics that are much more r4cy than this one hahaha

It would be a good contribution to the fanfic if you included in some future chapter the outcome of the MC's death, that is, the karateka's sentence

Honestly, from the first act of aggression I would have tried to distance myself to find out what was happening, I don't like to fight but I think it's a basic thing that if you are attacked your first instinct is to get away from the pain, the MC was apparently petrified.

And what's the problem? Aren't there many ways to solve that problem at Marvel? Even in the MCU there are at least 4 methods, I don't see the problem.

The system is really annoying, I really couldn't stand having someone yelling insistently near me.

Just try not to rehash everything that happened in the game scene by scene, the tractor scene could have been avoided.

What do you want Harry for?

It's really nice to find fanfics that don't repeat the same things as every other Harry Potter fanfic.