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Ibaraki2221Lv34yr
2020-08-14 15:55

Review after chapter 88 I've read this despite all the bad reviews of this novel. And I've got to say that this is an interesting story. The volume 1 is too bland. There's no character development and world building. He's the only character in the whole volume. The others are just extras that he killed. I think that most people got bored and didn't pass through volume 1. I think you can skip volume 1 and start with chapter 20. It will not affect your reading. The volume 2 is the start where a lot of characters appear and the world is slowly forming. The world is too large and we currently couldn't explore it because he's staying in one city. We're currently in chapter 88 and I've got to say that there's a lot of things that will happen in this story considering what explained in the last arc. 88 chapters weren't enough to decide this story like those other novels. Maybe, this wasn't even ten percent of the novel. The only downside of this story was the poor grammar.

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KottuRotiLv12

Bro exact thoughts

ANormalHumanLv2

I agree the same fam the grammar is bit off for me but the story still quit good

Zehel_TokibitoLv2

you are so funny i forgot how to laugh

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wajoli_zakoLv4

did his capsule at least have a reason to explode? as long as fhe reason not shown the story would automatically suck.

AeoexLv4

has the 'grammar' improved in all these chapters at all ?

nyypeLv4

you re right

wajoli_zako:did his capsule at least have a reason to explode? as long as fhe reason not shown the story would automatically suck.
AeoexLv4

i've now read up to chapter 301 and i can definitely say that it has improved but its still somewhat broken but much more readable.

Aeoex:has the 'grammar' improved in all these chapters at all ?
SpectreOfKaosLv15

Does it matter? that life is over anyway

wajoli_zako:did his capsule at least have a reason to explode? as long as fhe reason not shown the story would automatically suck.
Tylor_RoneyLv14

is he in the same world where he died if not then who fking cares

nyype:you re right
nyypeLv4

of not the same, and I care of the causes of transmigrating. Thats your choice, bot everybody is same

Tylor_Roney:is he in the same world where he died if not then who fking cares
Normal_Person_1869Lv3

It did say he was rank one so it could be worn out and then explode

wajoli_zako:did his capsule at least have a reason to explode? as long as fhe reason not shown the story would automatically suck.
Josiah_Jones_0910Lv1

he was the best player so he obviously Played alot so maybe it overheated

wajoli_zako:did his capsule at least have a reason to explode? as long as fhe reason not shown the story would automatically suck.
dukkehLv4

his grandfather was the creator of this game and prob created it in order for mc to get future knowledge of the world he got "transmigrated" into. actually his background is the most interesting thing in this novel.

Josiah_Jones_0910:he was the best player so he obviously Played alot so maybe it overheated
angel701Lv5

Harem?

Michael_Brooks_8630Lv12

it is a good story though the Grammer is horrible it isn't the worst I have seen. Though my question at this point is why isn't BRYAN the main character he is practically invincible. A few of the side characters seem stronger then Shota tbh

Percent_GraderLv4

What makes this mc deferent from the other mc that reincarnated and became a animal/monster

Ian_MeadowsLv15

While there are multiple female characters that like the main character to various degrees, I would still say that this is not a harem book as there are plenty of male characters in the group that are just as detailed characters. Also, the main character is mainly focusing on ways to survive in a world where he’s a goblin and the Greek and other gods are real and still very much in the smiting mood.

angel701:Harem?
Baku_AkatsuLv13

aight thx bro. i usually power through, but I can't help it

THE_SAVAGE_KITTYLv14

Grammerly everyone get the to author to edit everything with Grammerly

KottuRoti:Bro exact thoughts
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