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VictoriousHermit
VictoriousHermitLv104yr
2020-07-26 13:11

Read up to chapter 16 From what I read it's pretty uninteresting with it not really explaining anything like the main character goblin boy, he's so boring and all that's done is fighting and it's not even fun nor interesting, The main focus is stats and evolving but even that is done poorly. The dungeon sounds lame with pretty poor world building and the protagonists background is pretty boring he's the BEST player in the game because... he got lucky with a broken item yeet Also I think I would've kept reading but fate and prophecy showed up and I hate those. Maybe it gets better as you go on who knows Summary: a pretty boring novel that shoves you along

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jamwerewolf
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if you read more of the story it shows a lot more you barely got into the story don't act like you know the whole story of 600+ chapters in 16 chapters

JimiMali04
JimiMali04Lv13

True. If you read futher you can see character development and world building get better than before..

jamwerewolf:if you read more of the story it shows a lot more you barely got into the story don't act like you know the whole story of 600+ chapters in 16 chapters
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