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Well, it's time for me to write my own review of this fanfic. Yeah, yeah, you understood correctly: I'm writing a review for a work that has my author tag on it. Even though I'm essentially a translator, since the tag is there, why not speak my mind. As everyone could already tell, especially those who have read this work (it's hard to even call it a fanfic when the author builds his own world in it), I'm just a translator, a servant of the people who wants to please all readers with good output quality, that is, the translation quality. And, essentially, a servant to the authors of these works. As weird, funny, or incomprehensible as that may sound, that's how I see the role of translators. After all, first and foremost, we were all readers and wanted to take on the role of heralds to spread these stories further. And since I've been given the chance to write a review for my own work, let me start with an honest confession: evaluating yourself is always harder than evaluating someone else's text. On one hand, I know every comma I put in myself. On the other hand, that's exactly why I see all the places where it could have been done better. Where the phrase sounds too smooth and loses the author's roughness. Where a joke is funny in the original but just politely smiles in the translation. Where a character speaks not in their voice, but in mine. So my review won't be so much praise or scolding as a conversation about what worked and what still needs to be rewritten. I hope you'll be interested in taking a look behind the scenes of translation. And if not, just read the story and enjoy it. In the end, all of this was started for the reader. I guess it was back in 2023 and 2024 when I first saw this work. As depressing as it sounds, I was frustrated because almost every work on that platform lacked any originality. No, no, I'm not trying to insult authors who write in fanfic fandoms. I'm talking about those works that don't have a shred of originality and look like carbon copies of others. Almost everywhere, people were equally trying to chase trends, copying styles, worldbuilding, and genres. Others, who couldn't come up with anything better, used neural networks to write fanfics. Yeah, it wasn't regulated back then, so regular people read these works expecting a real human wrote them, and saw they were written without a single punctuation error, but always noticed logical errors in the text's structure. But that's not the point. Let's get back to why I started this conversation and why I decided to write this review in the first place. Back then, I was actually planning to give up everything related to literature and just continue existing as a person, since nothing really attracted me then except literature. Yeah, maybe I would've found another hobby back then, or maybe not, so I'll never know how it would've all ended, but this specific work prevented all of that. I stumbled upon the work itself by chance, just browsing the book platform. And I accidentally clicked on it. When I saw the cover and the title of this work, I thought: is this some kind of joke? Wardrobe? Then I saw the description. And then I decided to take a look at what it was made of. And I have never been so happy to find out I stumbled upon it. Right from the first chapters, I was hooked on this story by how the author positioned kanmusu in his world, by the characters' personalities, his worldbuilding, politics, relationships, dialogues, interactions, and consequences. In all of this, I saw logic, sadness, joy, disappointment, interest, and in all of this, a personality. The whole personality, handwriting, style, and effort the author puts into writing this work. And then I became completely interested in this story. Believe it or not, but haven't you ever experienced this when you finally see something new? I saw everything I just listed in this. The way Ulyanovsk feels, denies, condemns, arranges things, scares, makes people laugh, gets angry, rejoices, teases, talks, shows care, protection, and everything I like and dislike about her. Yeah, there are positive moments and negative ones. But always understandable. There's nothing I couldn't come to terms with, since every action always had a consequence and responsibility. And when more and more characters appeared, I always saw a personality in them, and that's why I fell in love with this work (not just for that, of course, but it's a huge plus). And then I came to this platform, and it occurred to me that for some reason I just wanted to see this work here. That's how all the subsequent actions started, just so you could see this work the way you see it now. From a regular draft in Word to getting approval from the author, publishing, and translating chapters. Yeah, there were screw-ups, there were mistakes, there were moments when I couldn't fully translate this work the way I wanted to, because I didn't always have enough understanding and knowledge of this language. And let's be honest: we can always see all the emotion in our native language, but completely miss it in another. There were moments when I burned out and completely rewrote a chapter, and moments when I missed something and later edited it in an already published chapter. Most likely, it was really hard for me to write all this text, dividing it into lots of paragraphs. We're too used to writing and reading everything in big blocks. And the dialogues had to be reworked too. So please tell me, can you see the difference or not? The raw version taken from a machine translation site: And the most pleasant find was twelve kits for assembling deck versions of brand-new Su-57 aircraft from some kind of sophisticated composite. It was as if they had taken real fiberglass, from which full-size devices are made. And as many as two Ka-52 attack helicopter wings, four in each. Both new items were delivered with a set of weapons. — It looks like I'm expected to practice shooting. The fifty—seventh "Drying" is good, it's three "Mosquitoes" instead of one, Ulyanovsk concluded. — An attack helicopter with an anti-ship missile is also good, the only question is why? I don't seem to have a habit of letting deep ones get close enough to hit them from helicopters.… Suddenly, a soft exclamation and the muffled sound of something soft hitting wood came from the bedroom. Frowning, Ulyanovsk distracted himself from examining the gifts of the command and hurried to the crime scene, summoning a Ka-31 radar patrol helicopter on the move to make it easier for himself to search for violators of his peace. And considering that the source was in a room with a closet, chosen by the mysterious pranksters for their prank, the precaution did not seem unnecessary. And here's my personal version, translated with my own vision: The real prize? Twelve kits for carrier-based Su-57s, machined from some kind of advanced composite that felt almost like the actual material used in full-scale production. Plus two squadrons of Ka-52 Alligator attack helicopters, four birds each, both complete with weapons packages. "Looks like someone's planning live-fire drills," he concluded. "Su-57 carrying three Moskits instead of one, good. Attack helicopters with anti-ship missiles, also good. Question is: why? I don't exactly have a habit of letting Abyssals get close enough for rotary-wing work..." A soft thud and a muffled yelp came from the bedroom. Ulyanovsk's brow furrowed. He left the crate and moved toward the sound, spinning up a Ka-31 radar surveillance helicopter on the way, better safe than sorry. Given the noise was coming from the same room as the wardrobe, extra caution seemed entirely appropriate. Yeah, there were places where I didn't like how I translated, but I didn't have alternatives, since our language is rich in synonyms, antonyms, and variations of the same words. But still, I put a lot of effort into translating these works. And I hope you'll appreciate it. Well, I think that's it for now. Yeah, that's all. I have a lot of things in my head that I could talk about, but I think there's no need for that in this rambling. If you have any questions left or want to clarify something, you can always ask here! So, I think that's it for now. So please, guys, those of you who pass by and look at reviews of works first: don't pass by this work and start reading! Don't wait for it to hit at least a hundred chapters, since the chapters themselves are very long and captivating. There isn't a single one where it's even slightly uninteresting or where the interconnection and development of relationships and interactions between characters are missing. So please, start reading it! 『END』 『』『』『』『』『』

Well, it's time for me to write my own review of this fanfic. Yeah, yeah, you understood correctly: I'm writing a review for a work that has my author tag on it. Even though I'm essentially a translator, since the tag is there, why not speak my mind. As everyone could already tell, especially those who have read this work (it's hard to even call it a fanfic when the author builds his own world in it), I'm just a translator, a servant of the people who wants to please all readers with good output quality, that is, the translation quality. And, essentially, a servant to the authors of these works. As weird, funny, or incomprehensible as that may sound, that's how I see the role of translators. After all, first and foremost, we were all readers and wanted to take on the role of heralds to spread these stories further. And since I've been given the chance to write a review for my own work, let me start with an honest confession: evaluating yourself is always harder than evaluating someone else's text. On one hand, I know every comma I put in myself. On the other hand, that's exactly why I see all the places where it could have been done better. Where the phrase sounds too smooth and loses the author's roughness. Where a joke is funny in the original but just politely smiles in the translation. Where a character speaks not in their voice, but in mine. So my review won't be so much praise or scolding as a conversation about what worked and what still needs to be rewritten. I hope you'll be interested in taking a look behind the scenes of translation. And if not, just read the story and enjoy it. In the end, all of this was started for the reader. I guess it was back in 2023 and 2024 when I first saw this work. As depressing as it sounds, I was frustrated because almost every work on that platform lacked any originality. No, no, I'm not trying to insult authors who write in fanfic fandoms. I'm talking about those works that don't have a shred of originality and look like carbon copies of others. Almost everywhere, people were equally trying to chase trends, copying styles, worldbuilding, and genres. Others, who couldn't come up with anything better, used neural networks to write fanfics. Yeah, it wasn't regulated back then, so regular people read these works expecting a real human wrote them, and saw they were written without a single punctuation error, but always noticed logical errors in the text's structure. But that's not the point. Let's get back to why I started this conversation and why I decided to write this review in the first place. Back then, I was actually planning to give up everything related to literature and just continue existing as a person, since nothing really attracted me then except literature. Yeah, maybe I would've found another hobby back then, or maybe not, so I'll never know how it would've all ended, but this specific work prevented all of that. I stumbled upon the work itself by chance, just browsing the book platform. And I accidentally clicked on it. When I saw the cover and the title of this work, I thought: is this some kind of joke? Wardrobe? Then I saw the description. And then I decided to take a look at what it was made of. And I have never been so happy to find out I stumbled upon it. Right from the first chapters, I was hooked on this story by how the author positioned kanmusu in his world, by the characters' personalities, his worldbuilding, politics, relationships, dialogues, interactions, and consequences. In all of this, I saw logic, sadness, joy, disappointment, interest, and in all of this, a personality. The whole personality, handwriting, style, and effort the author puts into writing this work. And then I became completely interested in this story. Believe it or not, but haven't you ever experienced this when you finally see something new? I saw everything I just listed in this. The way Ulyanovsk feels, denies, condemns, arranges things, scares, makes people laugh, gets angry, rejoices, teases, talks, shows care, protection, and everything I like and dislike about him. Yeah, there are positive moments and negative ones. But always understandable. There's nothing I couldn't come to terms with, since every action always had a consequence and responsibility. And when more and more characters appeared, I always saw a personality in them, and that's why I fell in love with this work (not just for that, of course, but it's a huge plus). And then I came to this platform, and it occurred to me that for some reason I just wanted to see this work here. That's how all the subsequent actions started, just so you could see this work the way you see it now. From a regular draft in Word to getting approval from the author, publishing, and translating chapters. Yeah, there were screw-ups, there were mistakes, there were moments when I couldn't fully translate this work the way I wanted to, because I didn't always have enough understanding and knowledge of this language. And let's be honest: we can always see all the emotion in our native language, but completely miss it in another. There were moments when I burned out and completely rewrote a chapter, and moments when I missed something and later edited it in an already published chapter. Most likely, it was really hard for me to write all this text, dividing it into lots of paragraphs. We're too used to writing and reading everything in big blocks. And the dialogues had to be reworked too. So please tell me, can you see the difference or not? The raw version taken from a machine translation site: And the most pleasant find was twelve kits for assembling deck versions of brand-new Su-57 aircraft from some kind of sophisticated composite. It was as if they had taken real fiberglass, from which full-size devices are made. And as many as two Ka-52 attack helicopter wings, four in each. Both new items were delivered with a set of weapons. — It looks like I'm expected to practice shooting. The fifty—seventh "Drying" is good, it's three "Mosquitoes" instead of one, Ulyanovsk concluded. — An attack helicopter with an anti-ship missile is also good, the only question is why? I don't seem to have a habit of letting deep ones get close enough to hit them from helicopters.… Suddenly, a soft exclamation and the muffled sound of something soft hitting wood came from the bedroom. Frowning, Ulyanovsk distracted himself from examining the gifts of the command and hurried to the crime scene, summoning a Ka-31 radar patrol helicopter on the move to make it easier for himself to search for violators of his peace. And considering that the source was in a room with a closet, chosen by the mysterious pranksters for their prank, the precaution did not seem unnecessary. And here's my personal version, translated with my own vision: The real prize? Twelve kits for carrier-based Su-57s, machined from some kind of advanced composite that felt almost like the actual material used in full-scale production. Plus two squadrons of Ka-52 Alligator attack helicopters, four birds each, both complete with weapons packages. "Looks like someone's planning live-fire drills," he concluded. "Su-57 carrying three Moskits instead of one, good. Attack helicopters with anti-ship missiles, also good. Question is: why? I don't exactly have a habit of letting Abyssals get close enough for rotary-wing work..." A soft thud and a muffled yelp came from the bedroom. Ulyanovsk's brow furrowed. He left the crate and moved toward the sound, spinning up a Ka-31 radar surveillance helicopter on the way, better safe than sorry. Given the noise was coming from the same room as the wardrobe, extra caution seemed entirely appropriate. Yeah, there were places where I didn't like how I translated, but I didn't have alternatives, since our language is rich in synonyms, antonyms, and variations of the same words. But still, I put a lot of effort into translating these works. And I hope you'll appreciate it. Well, I think that's it for now. Yeah, that's all. I have a lot of things in my head that I could talk about, but I think there's no need for that in this rambling. If you have any questions left or want to clarify something, you can always ask here! So, I think that's it for now. So please, guys, those of you who pass by and look at reviews of works first: don't pass by this work and start reading! Don't wait for it to hit at least a hundred chapters, since the chapters themselves are very long and captivating. There isn't a single one where it's even slightly uninteresting or where the interconnection and development of relationships and interactions between characters are missing. So please, start reading it! 『END』 『』『』『』『』『』

This was an unexpected gem 💎 I didn't expect to be this good sadly it got dropped but I would still recommend it cause how good it is.

7/10 in terms of personal enjoyment Read about 88 chapters total. Skimmed the rest. It was great at the start but it became dragged out. It simply left the genre that i like. Action and magic(I guess it really was not that, i went in blind without looking at the tags etc on fanfiction.net). It became more about povs of the orginal characters, politics and the main protaganist's self reflection on the nature of good etc. I simply lost interest and not only that, I am not exactly confortable with western relationships. I still enjoyed it except the end. The writing is great and the author is well read. He was amazing in that regard... He wrote over 500000 words... More then 570000 words.... That is dedication since it took over 4 YEARS!!! From skimming the ending was anticlamatic... Really.... It makes sense considering where the story went. Its perfect for what it went for... Just not my thing. I like action you know. Alot of things simply happen offscreen in the story later on. Keep in mind this is a great story. I cant believe this is a fanfic... Wow. Thank you for the experience author! 9/10 with the writing 10/10 with the protaganist's characterisation

It's a really unique story, not keeping to the canon but develops its own plot to follow and does so wonderfully. This is the type of story I like seeing as it stays true to what it is and I hope to see more!

This is good shit, it's rare to find great Bleach fanfics. Writing is great, same with World Background. You can tell author didn't skimp with the research. Story is mostly slice of life with a lot of grinding, but I like it. Characters are on point, MC tend to be a bit too paranoid sometimes though. Updates are on the slow side now that it caught up. Keep it up author, hope for faster updates.

I haven’t read anything like this in a long time—it was really good. Actually, "good" is an understatement; it was *very* good. No, seriously, I loved it—I look forward to every new chapter!

this is like if Dr Doofenshmirtz was in DC one star because no more updates but everything else five stars

Only thing i can say is that this story is amazing and has A LOT of potential. its build to be a multiverse and with only HP author did a lot of amazing things. Keep it up author!!!

Love it! Cant wait until MC gets a Enduring Conviction (banished) Capital ship. Author I hope he gets one! I think the Mandalorians will love fighting the Covenant.

BOM, aqui é o autor, enfim eu estou reescrevendo essa obra, eu devo dizer que havia muitos problemas no que eu tinha escrevido dois anos atrás, além de eu ter rushado a obra de forma absurda, o que deveria durar 40 capitulos, no capitulo 15 já tinha acontecido, enfim, agora relendo eu odiei, então decidi reescrever tudo, espero que gostem

Would it kill you to use spell check. I’ve been listening to your story for a few days now and it’s great. But the Grammatical and Spelling errors keep getting me confused. I literally had to keep going back to try and figure out what you’re trying to say. It’s not too hard to check over the chapter. Please just fix it.

This is my first Euphoria Fan fiction, and I have to say, this has been spectacular. The way you portrayed each of their characters is very vivid, and you can actually see them making the same decisions in the series that you took in the book. I like how you kept it at a slow pace to set up the characters more and how the MC relates and interacts with them, instead of focusing it like we're just supposed to act as if the MC has always been part of the show. You made sure not to force the drug part of it in the beginning and focused more on the characters while still showing us what's to come without leaving us hanging, and I'm really looking forward to this a lot.

so far wonderful as a story. love the powers and abilities and pacing. so far. can't wait to see what comes next

Loving the story, (spoiler ahead) I like how it’s set a year before the anime so there is a bit of a grace period until shit hits the fan. Keep up the good work author :)

what has happened to this story, even patreon hasn't been updated since February. I miss listening to this story and I hope you return soon.[img=update]

Read it on qq, pretty cool premise, though I have one question: how often this one gonna update? Hope to hear from you soon. Best regards and keep going

It's an interesting story . It's funny that Harry doesn't realise how psychopathic he is and how the Dursleys fear him.

honestly this was one of the best fics I've ever read, I say WAS because of a sudden change in the story that destroys the MC Elias's identity. This fic was amazing in causing me to feel great happiness but also bitter pain, how far Elias had to work and suffer in order to become as strong as he is, but some things can't go on forever, I think because of how much he's gained the Author started to drown in it losing sight of what he's made of every lover and even the MC himself. Every character had clear reasons of why they loved Elias and how they loved him, but slowly that love became nothing more than obsession and lost all the meaning of why they loved him. its sad that I'll have to drop this amazing Fic, but id rather remember it for what it once was rather than what it will become.

I have hopes for this I wonder if u can make a Multiverse System that Connects to other Apocalyptic World Bro can get Enhancement from other worlds

this is the same book I was reading but with more chapters ‘I became a demon but shinobu is trying to kill me’ something like that but only has 143 chapters I so lucky to find this