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I love what I’m seeing so far I’ve always wanted to see a good adventure time oc fanfiction and it not being a harem and Marcy being the fl even more peak please don’t drop this and continue to cook

really enjoy your story when he get's to oa he should find out what happened and try and rebuild the corp and see what part of the timeline to see if he is before the battle of new York

Great story. I'm glad we got a rewrite. The plot is much smoother, and i like the character interaction. I am really interested to see what you change about the world as it is an AU of sorts

Bro, Actually I like your story a lot but just a personal opinion development of Romantic interest on Dxd side didn't look that Good it felt like we should have , that's why there is girls from dxd side. On the ATG side romantic development felt solid as it showed how after only focusing on Cultivating MC got to meet someone with he feels something of a peace. So if Possible kindly focus on this development as I don't want to drop it , just because MC feels collecting girls on dxd side.

I didn't know what to expect from this fic. This is one of the best I've read, im halfway through and it has yet to go dry. Definitely worth the read and I'll definitely recommend it to people

I read it more because there are very few mushoku fics. Personally, I did not like it, since it is 80% equal to the canon. In addition to many forced plots and characters with little or cero intelligence, including Gojo.

Insane world with insane characters and an MC that can’t catch a break lmao. It’s very entertaining, especially if you’re a fan of horror flicks and wanna see him tussle with the enemies properly. Give it a read!

This is surprisingly well-written. Don't get me wrong, it's 100% crack, but it's entertaining and the bullshit the mc spouts is actually pretty believable at times lol Not sure if this is a translation or an original works, but either way you can tell someone who was here during peak jujutsu slop time put effort into this. We also get to see more of potential man utilizing his strengths as a suicide bomber; 10/10

Dios, de verdad que necesito que está historia se actualice de forma semanal, necesito por lo menos un capítulo a la semana para estar satisfecho 🗿

This is a solid fanfic, interesting world building to boot. If you don't mind evil MCs, I say this is worth a shot.

Everything is good so far just keep consistent and you she be good and actually make and empire outside the main story and try to make every next chapter better or more meaningful than the last and learn new words to better portray your book

This is not an exaggeration. This is the best mushoku tensei novel ever. If this continues the way it does and the novel has more chapters. I can confidently say that this is my top 2 favorite fanfiction novel ever.

W story. Great start so far. Vegeta is very under used when it comes to self inserts. Can't wait to see where you take this. I hope he won't fall for false transformations like ssj2 and ssj3 and instead just break the limits of ssj1 form as is supposed to be the case. Manga made it extremely clear that ssj2 and ssj3 are both wrong way to proceed for a saiyan. The rest is up to you ofc.

The story is good especially when it doesn't always goes the way you want. Unexpected factor makes things interesting. Keep up the good work Author san. And never give up just like naruto kun :)

. easy to read. I love these tech stories that are making some progress. the story is progressing well for now. Keep up the good work author-san.

I would say this story overall is a decent read. Something’s I wish we could’ve seen before the ending, but overall I’d say it’s a solid read if you like Pokemon fanfics that aren’t too serious.

Interesting fanfic I must especially when the manager gets his boots and hops onto the pitch that was wild and unexpected tbh made me get a good laugh. Overall I would recommend to read this fanfic ngl its a must read for me

Really enjoying this story. The comedy is great, and the OC is hilarious lol. I’ve always liked One Piece fanfics where the MC is a Marine with his own troops and authority. I was able to binge a bunch of chapters at first, but now I’m starting to hold back since there aren’t many chapters left 😂. Feels kinda sad to run out and have to wait for new updates, so I’ll probably let a few chapters pile up before binge-reading again 😂. Hope you keep going!

Very nice read, although I do have one complaint, being that despite Hoshimi Miyabi being the main attraction, she's only like 20-30% screentime throughout the story.

This story has potential, starting with the premise, because it tells you where it is going without hiding anything, which is a good thing, because other stories would hide the fact that the protagonist is out of his mind, but here, the author admits it, the protagonist admits it, and other characters, like his sister, admit it too. There is something about it that makes you want to keep reading. Why? Because he is a person who is out of his mind; it is fun to see how he thinks, how there is a strange balance within a broken mind. But even though I like it, it cannot be denied that it has certain problems. The main one for me is that the author lets his impulses get the better of him. For example, and before anyone says it, I already know that Euphoria is one step away from being considered porn, but that doesn't change the fact that you have to know when to include it and when it is too much. And I don't think the author realizes that he includes it too much, in my opinion, but it is completely valid if someone else doesn't see it that way. I feel the same way about Adrian. I feel like he is a protagonist who is, how do I put it, ¿“attractively perfect”? Hahaha, let me explain: all the women fall in love with him or are attracted to him for one reason or another, because of his personality, his “superiority,” I don't know how to put it, like with Kat, where it is more on the ¿masochism? side, I guess you could say. I think this goes beyond being a characteristic of the character and becomes more of a “this is how it has to be”; there isn't a single woman who says “this guy is an idiot” and wants nothing to do with him, or ignores him, or thinks he's weird. No, it's simply insert screams of a schoolgirl in love about to faint, Adrian faints hahaha. I think the story needs that: a woman who is close to him but isn't in love with him, and obviously his sister doesn't count... And lastly, the pacing. There are moments when a single day stretches across too many chapters. I don't mind it from time to time, but when it keeps happening, it can make the story move more slowly than necessary. The system was also something I noticed. At first, it took up too much space within the chapters, although I think it is a positive thing that the author took the criticism into account and reduced it. That shows that he is willing to listen to his readers and improve. Despite all of this, I don't consider it a bad story. On the contrary, I think it has a lot of potential. The problems I mentioned seem to me to be mainly the mistakes of someone who is still finding their style and learning to control their impulses as a writer. Damn, that's a lot of text hahaha.

Warning to all those wanting to read this. Chapter 37-40 uses a very bad ai to translate this. By bad I don’t mean unreadable, I mean they use a bunch of big complex words. At chapter 41 and above the translation becomes readable again. So if you like the story so far don’t drop it at chapter 37-40 as it does get readable again.