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please don't drop this is peak it's been a long time since it's been a good warHammer fanfiction you're doing a terrific job

This is one of the best Shadow Slave fan fictions I’ve read in a while! The author has great update stability, and I really love the character interactions. The MC actually has a personality and is incredibly well-written. I highly recommend that anyone who reads this gives it a chance and writes their own review.

OK, I am thoroughly enjoying the story, but there is one thing that it does lack romance for Peter and him you you should really give them some romantic partners I suggest for Peter MJ the MCU MJ and it would be cool if he ended up with the scarlet witch when they get recruited for the Civil War, which should be soon right

The concept of bringing Fate’s Heroic Spirits into the Marvel Cinematic Universe is really interesting! Seeing characters like Artoria, Cu Chulainn, Gilgamesh, and other legendary heroes interacting with Marvel characters like Tony Stark, Natasha, Thor, and Nick Fury sounds incredibly entertaining. I especially like the idea of the characters living normal lives while their extraordinary identities and powers create unexpected situations. The crossover has huge potential for comedy, epic battles, and interesting interactions between the two universes. I’m looking forward to seeing how the author handles the power scaling, the reactions of Marvel characters to the Heroic Spirits, and how the Fate lore fits into the MCU. Definitely an intriguing premise for fans of both Marvel and Fate! Keep up the good work, author

I hate how you deleted all the chapters and are start starting anew, I don’t know why, but it makes it feel like you’re not trying to continue the story just repeat the same things.

Personally, I think this book is fantastic: no system, no overpowered elements, no romance, no harem—and finally, a dungeon-building story where the dungeon itself truly takes center stage!!!! While there are some weaknesses, I’m happy to overlook them because the core story has everything I was looking for. For those who haven’t read it yet: the main character has no backstory, there’s hardly any character development, and the world-building is sparse—plus, it kicks in quite late. There are occasional time jumps, and some descriptions can be very confusing. For those reading the German version: the translation isn’t always spot-on, which sometimes results in different terms being translated using the same German word.

I won’t lie — it’s written quite well. But the system itself makes the main character nothing more than an actor playing a role. Everything he does isn’t his own actions or decisions; he just sees the biggest reward and obediently does what he’s told. The fic had potential, but it’s not for me. Good luck with the story anyway.

I enjoy how the breathing techniques come about and how the story has been changed by the MC, Please continue to update this story at your own pace

Absolutamente increible, de las mejores obras que he leido en esta pagina La historia y como en los comentarios se debaten su decisiones le agrega mucho. Simpremente PEAK

I love the Story and how it's going. But I just heard about John Wick as Ghost Rider on Facebook and I have not been able to stop thinking about it, so I had this picture made.

I like the story, it just kinda feels like one of those stories that you read where the self-insert doesn’t really change anything in the story. Like despite the fact that the MC has chakra and is clearly not normal Nash, for some reason is still hating on the MC (who has taken the place of Asta), and it seems like the world’s determined to make the MC take Asta’s place in every way, which I get is the whole premise of the thing, but it just kinda feels like one of those self-insert fanfics where the only thing that the mc changes is the dialogue between characters. And so far everything has been the same as the original anime except for some obvious changes that come with MC. Anyway I’m rambling, all I’m trying to say is I hope that it does diverge a little bit from the original story and become his own thing, and not a fanfic where despite the mc doing things differently everything still turns out the same.

Quite frankly, a breath of fresh air. A protag who isn't a sociopath, an interesting setting, a fun premise, and we can't leave out how well-written it is. The fact that my CLANKER senses didn't go off was a huge win by itself. I'm sold on this, and I hope to read a lot more.

nice book I like how the mc is not a Rick dog or obsessed with hiding everything I've read too many fics like that

i forgot this is a Chinese tl. or is it even a tl? no China. not even half chinese. so that's great. fully Portuguese. great character building. need more chaps. im hungry for more. so chop chop

It's a good read with a decent twist to the og cote. You follow the mc, who is basically another Koenji but in Class A, and will only listen to Sakayanagi. He isn't afraid to prove he is #1, and it has a really, really good lead up to year 2 of the original LN. The reason it isn't a perfect 5/5 is because, in my opinion, the original LN only has a 4/5 world background, and this fanfic does very little to change it. Even with this, I would still highly recommend trying it out if you liked cote.

Great novel don't ever drop this. I want more chapters. The concept for this novel is great. The drama an comedy is excellent. The plot an pacing is amazing. The MC is ok while the chapter length is long. The grammar is great.

pretty good fic ,very detailed and smart reasonable mc , if theirs any fault it could be that its paced kind of slow which i don't mind personally

I'm only giving this a 3 for update stability because this is a new fic. Once more chapters are available, as long as the author or TL keeps going and doing a good job, I will change it to 5 stars. This is really good and funny so far.

no changing names mid chapter. mc is not omega ultra powerful that the story dies off. more kingdom building then curb stomp catch them all waifus.good story good pacing good side characters that don't feel like a placeholder for a scene

Great update rate. Good fanfiction. Maybe some more interactions outside of the political aspect but between the clans and familes inhiabiting the island as fluff but overall great.

Sorry for the long review 😅 It's still to early to give an in-depth review, but as of chapter 11 I'll give it a 5/5. There are no obvious mistakes, everything feels smooth. And this might be a rare original hxh and not a translation, the only real evidence I have is the cover, if you click on it it has his username at the bottom. My only real critique is a small one and that is the mc feels somewhat one sided. His only goal as of now is to get stronger, he has no friends, hobbies, relationships, he has no interest in anything besides getting stronger. And I understood that, he went through multiple traumatic events, where strength would have been helpful, he feels insecure and unsafe, it makes sense why he pursuing strength. BUT hes spending every day thinking about getting stronger that eventually he's going to burn out. That's why people have hobbies, maybe he likes cooking, playing sports, traveling, puzzles, fashion. It can be anything that interests him, as long its relaxing and enjoyable. For suggestions, the only one I have is If you do decide to continue the story all the way to the Dark Continent I would suggest making the DC a place filled with unique monsters, plants, biomes, etc. Go WILD, maby he find a dead monster that's always on fire, its nen. Floating islands that have ecosystems that make no sense, its nen. Maybe they find a type of plant that shrinks him, don't worry its nen. Humans with nen can already control the elements, space and time, and they can also make stuff like greed Island, now imagine an environment where nen is far more abundant and there are more resources. There should NOT be fully functioning cities and civilizations just chilling there. That's the one thing I don't like about other hxh stories, they make the DC just another continent that has people, cities, and countries. They rarely focus on the ecosystem and the environment that makes the DC a truly dangerous place for humans. Of course these are just my opinions and thoughts. This is a great story that people should give try.