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I am really not a fan about those long ass Chinese Martial Arts Move.Those name really kills the vibe and immersion for me.

story is very good compared to other fanfics as he doesn't have to follow the plot upto 100% and character description/behavior is is accurate...but WHEN IS THE UPDATE!!!!!?

I can only say the story itself was well written has a well described plot and decent world building. But I dislike the Main Characters setting and the lack of hope in the story. I don't see a reason the MC would keep working hard for, knowing the future plot lacks a driving force to push the main characters actions as he has no hope the simulation boost is weak and almost non existent. He has lived 5 lifetimes and all his skills and abilities could be described as useless if you seriously examine his skill set he barley achieved anything with his own abilities in the simulations everything was from others helping his simulated self in some way. The story is basically torture to read and I feel he should give up being a ninja as he is just causing pain to those around him ruining there lives. So the more I read the more I hate him and its starting to interfere with my ability to look at the story objectively so I decided to drop it here while I can still give a positive review. P.S: I just want the MC to quit being a ninja at this point as it feels like its pointless and author your settings for him are legit torture I hope you don't reincarnate as the MC as no one deserves to live like that.

Amazing story! Been a while since I got goosebumps a couple of times, and the same story. Nice work!

I recommend you to read 💯 mc is smart and also strong and most importantly mc is not like those i read where mc is strong but like some fan lick luffy

I've read this story on spacebattles and it's great in most aspects but one. The protagonist acts kinda like a woman. It would make more sense, if it was a chick reborn in the body of Brock, but the way it is now it's just weird to read as a guy. It seems like a woman trying to write her ideal man (or at least the ideal version, she tells other people about).

i have been here since the release of chapter 30 i Remember it back then and till now my most favorite weekly novel i never gave powerstones i shall keep giving my powerstone from now on every day

it's definitely a very interesting read sometimes it gets a little boring since to get to the fun parts are interesting sections you have to go through some world building and it feels like it goes too fast and too slow sometimes which is weird but overall it's great compared to a lot of fanfictions this is completely phenomenal can't really hate on something that is objectively better than 90% of the stuff that ends up here then again I'm also only at chapter 40 so I don't know how good or bad it's going to later on but the way it's getting written I think it's going to be great I think it's going to get better last time passes

I can’t even put it into words—everything is perfect. I absolutely love it! Btw, since I’m new here, I wanted to ask, how do we give someone a Golden Ticket?

I think this is the most complete football system fanfic I have seen so far. It clearly sets out a system with clear rules and limits. And the setting of the story, with the rags to riches, is also realistic (the author did cheat a little by copying the route that Lee Kang-in, former PSG current Atletico Madrid took). So basically, this story shows what would happen if someone with a system and later superhuman ability was dropped into the real world. There are no sudden nerfing of the MC or the system to force the plot or to create artificial drama. This does lead to the plot accelerating like crazy, but that is the only logical outcome considering the system he has, The ripple effect of the MC is clearly shown. (Unlike some FF where the MC's team goes like 10-0 every match, and the opponent loses like 2-3 to injury or red cards, but the league results and Champions League draw stay EXACTLY THE FUCKING SAME EVERY SINGLE FUCKING SEASON) The characters in the story stays internally consistent. So the decisions they make is logically consistent with their character. (I don't mean that the real-life person would do that. If a character is shown as passionate and competitive but clean<even if this is false in the real world >, they will make choices that fits that.) So yeah, the story was great, the characters in the story make human choices, the MC's system stays consistent (there are upgrades), and there are no forced drama just for the sake of plot or story length. It really just shows a very realistic story of what would happen if you gave a young, passionate, but untalented, football fan a magical football system. Only warning! This is a Korean story, so there are two things you need to know before you start. 1. Korean Age: Korean age starts at 1 at birth, and goes up every New year. That means you can't just do international age -1 to calculate. So the MC, Korean fans/news, and the narrator uses this system. While the international news and commentators use the international age. 2. Korean Money: The wage of the players are often listed in Korean Won, and not Euro or Pound. This is not confusing, but it might be annoying for some. Just think 1000 Korean Won = about $1 for your quick mental math.

Esta buena la trama y sería bueno que viaje a otro planeta como su maestro Y ojalá no se desvíe mucho de la trama original asta pasado 5 o 6 años en la escuela

Dammmm I thought this was gonna be some mid tier novel but this is pure gold!!! Love the art the pacing and how the story is going OMG!!!

i love it. even though the story's pace is a bit fast, it's the first ORV fanfic i've ever seen so i adore this. please continue writing.

Ok wow, this is a good fanfic, though slow at the start it really hooked me in, the dialog between them is kind of strange but i can live with that, also really recomend it.

10/10 its probably the best fanfic of this style ive read. really shows the writer put a lot of love in this. sadly there is never enough to read.

It was a really fun ride and a great Pokémon Fanfic. Of course, the entire section after the Doubles Master felt a little rushed, but it isn't a deal-breaker, for sure. Overall, a good wish-fulfillment fic, with Cynthia as the female lead, so definitely recommend.

Excellent story! I have to say at first I was put off by a cripple MC HOWEVER it does get WAY better and becomes a great story

everything is nice about the story but please change the cover of the novel it doesn't even relate to what the story is about

The rating is a 5.0, I'm not giving it because perfection doesn't exist. I'm unhappy with the small harem and the cliffhanger ending but I'll take it. So yeah, read this book!

i like it a lot. dont know why there arent more reviews tbh. language is great, story progression is moving forward nicely, power system is good as well. the only negative thing i could come up with is that its a lot of text and little dialogue. that might hopefully change once he interacts with more people tho

I usually don't comment on books but I truly love this fanfiction especially the Mc and his interaction with the cast. please don't drop this.