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BookWorm313Lv134yr
2020-09-04 20:36

As of Chapter 110 Writing Quality: 5/5 Little to no mistakes. I will not say that there are no mistakes as i might have missed them. However, i have not spotted any mistakes thus far. Story Development: 4/5 The story development is great but nothing extraordinary. My only issue with this story was him attaining the ear rings at the beginning as it felt relatively plot armourish to me. Besides that the development is interesting. The first arc was relatively bland in my own opinion though (dungeon arc). However, the current school arc is great. The introduction of new characters who have this sense of mystery around them is interesting. Character Design: 4/5 The MC is a goblin based character that can evolve. This is nothing new among light and web novels. The character has a grimdark vibe which I personally like. The fact that the MC cannot remember much of his past life allows the author to cover alot of potential plot holes which was a great and simple idea. The side characters have are interesting as well as you can tell that there is a story behind each and everyone of them. I personally cannot wait to see their backgrounds. Updating Stability: 5/5 If i could i would gibe this a 10 out of 5. Daily updates. World Background: 4/5 Pretty cliche litrpg vibe. Magic and monsters. World wise, the area in which the MC has gone to are only 3 locations so far. However this novel is pretty new so there is alot of potential to expand. Overall: 4.4 I will say that this is one of the better novels on this application. The main thing this story is lacking a something unique. This story is relatively cliche and nothing about it stands out compared to most other novels. However, despite it being cliche, the author still wrote the story very well. The best thing about this novel so far are the mysteriousness of the side characters. The side characters alone have enough impact that a novel can be written for them (biggest difference compared to other novels). For this i give props to the author. I would even go to say that this novel has one of the best side characters so far. I hope this story contunues and will continue to support this novel.

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Volcanic07_Lv13

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Massoud_KamalLv1

Was wondering if anyone knew of a book where the mc doesnt use magic at all and only uses physical strength?

NachoAlfaroHLv13

Dang, thanks for the accuracy of your review, wasn’t sure if I should give it a read, but now I will

Dirt_Panda_6799Lv12

I have to give this a 10out of 10 !! I just love it!!

ShinbihLv12

yez

PRlNCEJAYSAACLv4

book eh? I've read Samson's story in the Bible. check it out.😂🔨

Massoud_Kamal:Was wondering if anyone knew of a book where the mc doesnt use magic at all and only uses physical strength?
Smoll_FuHuaLv4

One Punch Man

Massoud_Kamal:Was wondering if anyone knew of a book where the mc doesnt use magic at all and only uses physical strength?
Chhay_NauchLv2

itssssss gud

pepioro123Lv10

wow.

JocomLv13

I'd argue the writing quality isn't great... as there's some serious and frequent grammar mistakes, almost constantly, the sentences are dragged out to say the same thing over and over and in vivid nonesensical detail at time... like describing the steps of drinking a bottle of water. Granted I've read a lot and I did not have these same complaints at first as the mistakes were minor and almost cute but after time it got really annoying as it just destroyed the sentence structure and made the whole thing confusing. In a way I guess this could be considered a compliment as despite all of that I'm still reading it...

Lost_godLv4

MMORPG:Martial Gamer

Massoud_Kamal:Was wondering if anyone knew of a book where the mc doesnt use magic at all and only uses physical strength?
AplldthLv11

Has no editor. For someone who's second language is English it is not bad. also the mistakes are minor.

Jocom:I'd argue the writing quality isn't great... as there's some serious and frequent grammar mistakes, almost constantly, the sentences are dragged out to say the same thing over and over and in vivid nonesensical detail at time... like describing the steps of drinking a bottle of water. Granted I've read a lot and I did not have these same complaints at first as the mistakes were minor and almost cute but after time it got really annoying as it just destroyed the sentence structure and made the whole thing confusing. In a way I guess this could be considered a compliment as despite all of that I'm still reading it...
JocomLv13

You did read my comment correct?

Aplldth:Has no editor. For someone who's second language is English it is not bad. also the mistakes are minor.
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Dirt_Panda_6799:I have to give this a 10out of 10 !! I just love it!!
deaf_nerdLv14

You clearly didn't get past chapter 1. Chapter 1 was very well written, but chapter 2 and on had a lot of bad grammer mistakes.

Air101Lv11

Harem or no?

DreamstrafeLv15

I don't know of one, but I do know one, where physical strength and defense are his primary build early on, and the novel is pretty fantastic. he only starts using magic later on, but he's definitely not a spellcaster. it's called Armipotent, and the dude runs around like a Chad swinging a 200kg halberd around, and he fights 90% just with his strength and melee skills. (idk if something like this will whet your whistle for a beefy protagonist, but it Def did mine. (also I learned about this novel the same way I'm telling you, I asked for a mc that focuses on str and con/defense rather than all these annoying MC's who are like movt speed all the way)

Massoud_Kamal:Was wondering if anyone knew of a book where the mc doesnt use magic at all and only uses physical strength?
Josiah_Jones_0910Lv1

you must be mistaken there's so much grammar errors, but other than that your right

King_M_3433Lv1

Great

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