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LionessLover
LionessLoverLv114yr
2020-08-16 16:24

An embarrassing school slice-of-life power fantasy. Emotional age of whoever wrote this is around 12. It actually started out okay, but later it regressed more and more. Oh and of course MC always "smiles", every little thing he does is done with a smile. Quite stupid and creepy. How much trouble is it to write less awkwardly?

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BlackSheepKira
BlackSheepKiraLv1

It just a small problem. I don't get it why you 1 star the story

LionessLover
LionessLoverLv11

You are right. If I could give -1 I would but I have to settle for 1, sorry.

BlackSheepKira:It just a small problem. I don't get it why you 1 star the story
Ghoulxs
GhoulxsLv2

Better than your story...

LionessLover:You are right. If I could give -1 I would but I have to settle for 1, sorry.
Odin5935_Norse
Odin5935_NorseLv14

Check out this reviews he just seeks books he doesnt like and revoews them

Alpadin
AlpadinLv4

I agree, most of his reviews (all but one) are negative/filled with hatred. It feels like he is a little kid throwing a tantrum over a drop of milk. Not reliable.

Odin5935_Norse:Check out this reviews he just seeks books he doesnt like and revoews them
SeaBass
SeaBassLv3

Thats what I thought

Alpadin:I agree, most of his reviews (all but one) are negative/filled with hatred. It feels like he is a little kid throwing a tantrum over a drop of milk. Not reliable.
tatsuya_K_O_A
tatsuya_K_O_ALv14

ooh shit you really now how to crack me up 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂😂😂😍

LionessLover:You are right. If I could give -1 I would but I have to settle for 1, sorry.
Gruuno
GruunoLv11

Yea nah, don't listen to this review. No clue how it got 25 likes. Guess people just blindly liked it.

LionessLover
LionessLoverLv11

It got the Likes because it'*s true, little fanboy.

Everythingonurmind
EverythingonurmindLv4

I agree with ur points but this aint a 1 star

matteomequio
matteomequioLv3

if you go on with the story they tell you why he keep smiling, and why he never show a weak side

Frizepize
FrizepizeLv13

good thing your dead might be from Coronavirus but I hope that you die painfully

LionessLover:You are right. If I could give -1 I would but I have to settle for 1, sorry.
CryptoCat
CryptoCatLv5

I get it, it’s a small thing but it’s what makes or breaks the story. Not the first novel I’ve dropped after having seen one smirk too many.

aquario97
aquario97Lv5

Come on, no need to be that hostile.

Frizepize:good thing your dead might be from Coronavirus but I hope that you die painfully
Frizepize
FrizepizeLv13

I woke up recently back then, and I choose violence over long straining reason

aquario97:Come on, no need to be that hostile.
Cannonfddr_4443
Cannonfddr_4443Lv15

Not being able to cook doesn't make my taste buds stop working.

Ghoulxs:Better than your story...
DaoistEchPYX
DaoistEchPYXLv3

I like how unflitered this review is. thanks for not allowing me to waste my time.

Dexter_Sled_1111
Dexter_Sled_1111Lv13

Majority of readers just doesn't like info dumps so author can't just drop MC's backstory (what shaped him to be how he is) on us.He was taking it slow

LionessLover:It got the Likes because it'*s true, little fanboy.
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