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lupenLv55yr
2019-02-28 16:16

The story premise is quite good and starts of very smooth and i thought it had quite the potential when i first started reading it, but after ch 50 the story goes downhill very fast. The main character, Jon pretty much turns into the very common cringy, mainstream protagonist who overcomes every obstacle with the power of friendship, harem, incompetent enemies and plot armour. This is of course fine depending on the novel, but the elder scrolls world is very dark so it isn't exactly a place where such happy characters belong.

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El_DonAuthor

got you there man. got you there.

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Are you gonna fix this??

El_Don:got you there man. got you there.
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He's got you there

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