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Justin_T
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2018-06-18 07:29

This is a perfect example of a Fan-Fic done right. I rarely find myself so eager for more chapters, I'm literally shaking in excitement after reading the first 9 chapters just waiting for the next one. To the author bravo, you have beaten writing, what a story.

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El_Don
El_DonAuthor

Okay you need to calm down, take a deep breath because you only started shaking even before the game events start.

BloodHeaven
BloodHeavenLv5

Can I still enjoy this novel, even if I didn’t play Skyrim?

El_Don:Okay you need to calm down, take a deep breath because you only started shaking even before the game events start.
DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv6

We are almost on chapter 300 and the game still didn't start but im happy that you did not rush it but made the mc slowly build up his power even made him make a cultivation manual for him im niy sure if he ha e his wifes the idea how he does i only ha e 60 ch unread soo im not yet sure but man hope he dis cultivate a lot and at least could hold ground with his army when a small dragon attacks cant wait for that fighting scene keep up how you have been doing btw i was once a hater i did not like it how mc left that place with the tree ehere he could cultivate fast and he even told the guy therr how he is cultivating but i like it how you fixed that later on by telling us how he damaged his forgot the name its similar to a sould but its not that he got a body and a soul and that **** he uses to connect those two was damaged anyways hope mc has some nice fights with dragons and i hope he gets one dragon egg that he could take care of it making it his own mount

El_Don:Okay you need to calm down, take a deep breath because you only started shaking even before the game events start.
El_Don
El_DonAuthor

Thanks for all that... there are a lot of fight scenes here and there and I keep them detailed as much as I can. It will take a while till the Game Start volume because you know, this novel main focus is about the history of Dovahkiin, how he came up, what is he like, and what is the reason that brought him back from the outhside of skyrim at Helgen intro... there so much stuff and too little time but I will manage anyway. Also, there are no dragon eggs in the lore. But there will be a cool mount in the future.

DarkKnight32:We are almost on chapter 300 and the game still didn't start but im happy that you did not rush it but made the mc slowly build up his power even made him make a cultivation manual for him im niy sure if he ha e his wifes the idea how he does i only ha e 60 ch unread soo im not yet sure but man hope he dis cultivate a lot and at least could hold ground with his army when a small dragon attacks cant wait for that fighting scene keep up how you have been doing btw i was once a hater i did not like it how mc left that place with the tree ehere he could cultivate fast and he even told the guy therr how he is cultivating but i like it how you fixed that later on by telling us how he damaged his forgot the name its similar to a sould but its not that he got a body and a soul and that **** he uses to connect those two was damaged anyways hope mc has some nice fights with dragons and i hope he gets one dragon egg that he could take care of it making it his own mount
PrinceBright
PrinceBrightLv4

Top-notch story

PrinceBright
PrinceBrightLv4

Top-notch story

PrinceBright
PrinceBrightLv4

Top-notch story

PrinceBright
PrinceBrightLv4

Top-notch story

PrinceBright
PrinceBrightLv4

Top-notch story

PrinceBright
PrinceBrightLv4

Nice

VANATORUL
VANATORULLv3

is there a part like a game/system rpg mode /one of the reson i started to read but not found

VANATORUL
VANATORULLv3

is there a part like a game/system rpg mode /one of the reson i started to read but not found

Rafar
RafarLv4

Xp sect

PrinceBright:Top-notch story
Riki_Abdurahim
Riki_AbdurahimLv5

Nice

FvkYouBoy
FvkYouBoyLv4

I don't see whats the hype Of this ff. It's boring as fvk

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