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So it isnt android 16, just some guy with nerfed superman powers.

Deer wont work no matter how big they become, they like to skip when running so not much stability, their hooves are very narrow so not much traction and a greater risk of injury and falling if they are armored and carrying a rider. Moose (not elk) however are everything that a horse is but better. wide hooves, muscular, extremly stable and agile when running and they have no problem attacking first if they feel like it. there is even a real world example of moose cavalry, Sweden (i think) had their neibours shitting themselves when they found out they were experimenting with moose cavalry, unfortunately it was far to expensive and time consuming to breed and train moose so the idea was scrapped. Just get rid of their antlers and let them trample anything in the way.

Bad idea, wolves are forward leaning when running and will definitely end up throwing off anyone trying to ride one, use them as a terror tactic and to chase down enemies when they call for a retreat or flee. not to mention that a sadle and rider will pretty much cripple any chanse they have att fighting freely. Cats are specialized ambush predators, even the big once. They have no long distance endurance and will always flee confrontation unless cornered, use them for what they are good for, which in this case is ambush and tracking.

Youve humanized demons, createures that mentaly are more akin to insects than mammals and whose nature i a core theme in Freiren. congratulaions you killed your story in the first 3 sentences, ive never seen anyone do it that fast before!

This is great and you are doing just fine so far. That said, we have enough evil in the world as is so please for the love of all that is holy, tell me you wont follow in the footsteps of the rings of power.

Why would a court magician have so much power? you cant have a servant decide who gets to rule, that would be weird.

the story start is kinda shit and I'm not really a fan of the changes that's been made to the magic system, but it does get way better later

the mc isn't a good and kind person, he's just mentally feeble and lacks the brain cells needed to make decisions someone sound of mind would do.

don't, that is completely unnecessary and would serve no purpose. give her a summon that can teach sage state and keep the rest of her powers skill based

How the hell does this random nobody have access to not only a Melta gun but also its schematics? that's the kind of shit that would have the Mechanicus flooding the entire hive with mustard gas and napalm just to make sure everyone that might have ever been in contact with those schematics can never speak of it again.