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delta12
delta12Lv35yr
2019-06-06 21:29

Just like some people said, it actually a fanfic done right. Unfortunately I think the author probably sometimes forgot that he didn't write an erotica. In the beginning, all those chuni thing actually kinda funny. The fan services with the bathhouse wench still tolerable, but when he oversexualized it with degenerating one of the woman the MC banging secretly in his office like a swine (he actually made her "OINK"), turn two of MC's love interest as a bisexual slut that will lick each other if MC absent during their horny moment and dual cultivation BS, then all oblivion broke lose. I think the author felt to the same hole like author of twilight by self insertion to much. It"s a shame that the hentai thing now integrated with the main story again. I had to drop it after the dual cultivation thing and the kitty moonlight incident that might or might not be lead to bestiality in the future. Let's hope not. Perhaps I will pick it up again in the future if there"s an abridged version.

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Godling3876
Godling3876Lv4

Suddenly glad I stopped before that. The h-scenes weren’t even good. Felt way too much like a xianxia than a Skyrim fanfic should.

Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk
Gilgamesh_Of_UrukLv4

Mongrel, You Have This King's Thanks For Saving His Time, Here Is A Small Reward:

Credo_A
Credo_ALv3

Who is the harem member?

NwithoneN
NwithoneNLv2

Thanks for the protection!

Triple_x
Triple_xLv10

I.n.s.e.s?

KazuT13_ArtyFJinx
KazuT13_ArtyFJinxLv13

who are the Harem women. if the women are good I'll try to read it even if I have to suffer. I'm desperate for awesome Skyrim Novels with Aela and Serana as their women. if it's not them I'm out of here.

KazuT13_ArtyFJinx
KazuT13_ArtyFJinxLv13

I just want a Kingdom Building Harem Novel with Aela and Serana as the Love Interests, is that too much to ask!?

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