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Hawkkkkkkkkkk
HawkkkkkkkkkkLv105yr
2019-07-20 00:28

It's way too cliche and constantly breaking the fourth wall in a bad way. With that also come constant Meta references like Truck-kun that litter the pages. It just feels like pandering to the obsessive audience that loves this kind of thing. Just the mere mention of Truck-kun is enough to make them jitter with pleasure. There's also constant editor and author notes which only serve to pull you out of the story, ruining your immersion. Considering the author constantly rambles on and on about immersion in the story, it's quite shocking that he doesn't recognize this fatal flaw. On the positive side, they're mostly present in the first chapter and seem to decrease heavily from there. But first impressions are everything, and my impression is already ruined. Both sentence structure and grammar are also nothing to write home about. Unfortunately, the story is written in a (hopefully) unintentional mix of present tense and past tense. As expected, it doesn't work out very well and severely detracts from the story. I really dislike present tense, so for me, this dislike is only made stronger each time the author mixes up his tenses, switching back and forth. I want to give this novel a better chance, but the chapters are a chore to read so I don't see how I ever possibly could.

Dragonborn Saga

El_Don
4.7
754 Chs

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james0sjr
james0sjrLv14

You forgot the constant misspelling of the same words over and over again, constant misuse of the same words over and over again, and then the incomplete sentences. The story starts out like 90% Skyrim and that remaining 10% is author contribution to the story. And to be honest, it isn't that good. He uses the same tropes as every other author but what pisses me off the most is his completely inconsistent character psychology/mentality. It is bad. In the later stages of the story, he starts stripping away the parts that made it what its and started forcing pieces of eastern fantasy in the story turning it into yet another cliche cultivation novel which wouldn't be that bad if the author were decent. I don't know if I will be able to finish this novel/keep reading it after 400 chapters but I won't have any regrets about dropping it.

5yr
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NulZilch
NulZilchLv5

The story was going good but then it started slipping off with MC constantly harping about being from another world and dragons attacking soon. If that was supposed to be a joke than it was unfunny and way too overused one. But that cat obsession bit threw me off and convinced me to drop this novel. Who the hell likes to read about a MC who goes full retard seeing a kitty? Not like, not love just a full on retard mode. These constant story immersion bits made it pain in the ass to read the story. Lots of people like this story. If it has any charm, i don't see it.

james0sjr:You forgot the constant misspelling of the same words over and over again, constant misuse of the same words over and over again, and then the incomplete sentences. The story starts out like 90% Skyrim and that remaining 10% is author contribution to the story. And to be honest, it isn't that good. He uses the same tropes as every other author but what pisses me off the most is his completely inconsistent character psychology/mentality. It is bad. In the later stages of the story, he starts stripping away the parts that made it what its and started forcing pieces of eastern fantasy in the story turning it into yet another cliche cultivation novel which wouldn't be that bad if the author were decent. I don't know if I will be able to finish this novel/keep reading it after 400 chapters but I won't have any regrets about dropping it.
5yr
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Viincentt
ViincenttLv13

it's awful I agree

4yr
5
Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk
Gilgamesh_Of_UrukLv4

Mongrel, You Have This King's Thanks For Saving His Time, Here Is A Small Reward:

4yr
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Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk
Gilgamesh_Of_UrukLv4

You Too mongrel:

NulZilch:The story was going good but then it started slipping off with MC constantly harping about being from another world and dragons attacking soon. If that was supposed to be a joke than it was unfunny and way too overused one. But that cat obsession bit threw me off and convinced me to drop this novel. Who the hell likes to read about a MC who goes full retard seeing a kitty? Not like, not love just a full on retard mode. These constant story immersion bits made it pain in the ass to read the story. Lots of people like this story. If it has any charm, i don't see it.
4yr
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Mordekkai
MordekkaiLv1

Thank you, friend, you're a friend.

2yr
BoredDaemonGod
BoredDaemonGodLv4

yeah, MC obsession with cat is just disgusting

NulZilch:The story was going good but then it started slipping off with MC constantly harping about being from another world and dragons attacking soon. If that was supposed to be a joke than it was unfunny and way too overused one. But that cat obsession bit threw me off and convinced me to drop this novel. Who the hell likes to read about a MC who goes full retard seeing a kitty? Not like, not love just a full on retard mode. These constant story immersion bits made it pain in the ass to read the story. Lots of people like this story. If it has any charm, i don't see it.
2yr
12
jamwerewolf
jamwerewolfLv4

He's from Egypt if you knew their history you would know how they feel about cats

NulZilch:The story was going good but then it started slipping off with MC constantly harping about being from another world and dragons attacking soon. If that was supposed to be a joke than it was unfunny and way too overused one. But that cat obsession bit threw me off and convinced me to drop this novel. Who the hell likes to read about a MC who goes full retard seeing a kitty? Not like, not love just a full on retard mode. These constant story immersion bits made it pain in the ass to read the story. Lots of people like this story. If it has any charm, i don't see it.
1yr
1
NOIR_THE_PROMODIAL
NOIR_THE_PROMODIALLv4

cat!? 😏.

BoredDaemonGod:yeah, MC obsession with cat is just disgusting
1yr
1
Daoist825PDv
Daoist825PDvLv13

Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk:Mongrel, You Have This King's Thanks For Saving His Time, Here Is A Small Reward:
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El_Don
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I am the Author, Oh mortals, readeth mine own words and obeyeth. Nay seriously, I needeth some valorous reviews to feeleth did motivate, I readeth all comments and reviews so thy words shall encourageth me. I very much feeleth fustian(proud) about this novel, it is so much joy, I shall writeth about mine own exp'riences and adventures in the world of Skyrim (Planet Nirn). I eke(also) playeth the game and readeth the wiki, so I can sticketh to the lore, I shall focus on the background-less NPCs and recreate a fitting story for those folk, the same way I didst in chapter 3. Support this novel, O pity readethers, so I bestow m're chapters upon thee. [A/N: a friend told me to write this in Shakespearean but I have a bad premonition]

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This is a perfect example of a Fan-Fic done right. I rarely find myself so eager for more chapters, I'm literally shaking in excitement after reading the first 9 chapters just waiting for the next one. To the author bravo, you have beaten writing, what a story.

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Ziavory
ZiavoryLv5

😑 Why is this in the top 10? Don't listen to the reviews, at most this story is average. It started out interesting but the mc acts like a generic, hotblooded 16 year old with very little development in the brain section. Excluding the fact that the world seems to revolve around him, he's op in the bad way. And the 'politics' in this world seems a bit...childish. Because it's totally normal how the mc who was an average guy in his past life is so much more cunning then the seasoned, old adults. Go read Joy of life or something for better, more realistic politics. The story is not bad, but it's also not good. It's Meh.

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josuamarques
josuamarquesLv3

I'd like to give this a comprehensive review of 1 star, but I can't simply for the fact that the author pumps out chapters like mad. But apart from that, this story is bad. And the sole reason is the author's nonexistent english. There are so many spelling and grammar mistakes that it quite literally gives me a headache. There are some editor notes thrown into the story from time to time but I doubt anyone has ever edited anything on this parody of a story. I do not understand how someone can read this, it is beyond me. It's not only that though, the erratic time skips and just pitifully described action scenes are just as grating. "The troll hit him, he flew away, he was hurt. We hit the troll, I hit him with magic. Troll dead.", that's a rough summary how any impactful battle scene goes. The story is bad, period.

5yr
spam444
spam444Lv4

Writing quality is pretty bad. Feels like it isn't even checked by the writer. Character design is kinda flat. The good thing is that it's quite hilarious most of the time. 'What type of humour', you might ask. Well it feels written by a anime-Skyrim fan. So at least we got Truck-kun and MxR reference.

6yr
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