Spider-Verse: Creeping Hunger

Oi, Oinkchan I thought your hand was paralyzed by mobile shock.

There is no way this story isn’t botted. 1. As of right now, there is literally no story. 2. The writing is sometimes weird. It feels like a translation. 3. The premise isn’t bad, but eventually it becomes a “inconsequential self-insert power trip.”

1st CH undesirable, Unbearable hot mess like bro just re-read it some time latter it's Plain cringe in the most potent state of matter

The plot makes absolutely no sense, the protagonist doesn't have a backstory, there's no characters, no logic. Some unreadable events put together without a reason.

Hello author, I was looking for some good Spider Man fics and you came as my savior 🙂. Also I would like to see MC in Spider-Verse movies and Spider Man: No Way Home. Hope you continue Oink-chan, love your stories ❤

This story just feels strange, like I am being trapped inside the brain of a st*pid person.

MC is incredibly awkward and has a tendency to behave like an idiot, despite his supposed intelligence. The weird maggot-glove is seriously edgy, cringe and overall a pointless addition to the story, that doesn't really add anything to the story. The MC also acts like a psycho sometimes. He just casually decides to buy pets and cut off their limbs, just to test the Lizard formula. He doesn't seem to hesitate about that decision either.

The OC is boring and weird. The charcaters themselves are all awkward. The only time it’s not too awkward is when the OC and Gwen were flirting but before and after that the characters just seem bland. Also when the OC does show personality it’s incredibly childish and cringe. For the most part there is no spelling or grammar errors. The updating stability is top tier. However after that everything else kind of just falls flat. I dropped at chapter 21 but maybe I’ll come back when there’s more chapters and see if my mind will be changed.

As well written as this is done, it really isn't my cup of tea more than anything because of the Mc's personality, until now ch 4 or 5 where I leave him, he seems like an average jerk highly competent at everything with apparent problems empathizing . I can't criticize much since it's just the beginning of the novel but I don't think I'll continue reading because I don't like Mc

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Good story. caveat being it's ruined by a weird, arrogant mc who has too much handed to him on a platter. Creeping hunger for a goldfinger was insane much less how redundant it is immediately made. Author is clearly new to writing but capable of good plotlines and executing them. Struggles however with believable character settings, interactions and writing a likeable mc. I think I can look forward to reading your work in a couple years author.

Really good, not only is the first fanfic exploring Earth 65 (Gwen's universe) as Peter parker that was suppoused to be dead, what i like is that is not just a spiderman Across te spiderman fanfic but it explore more about the marvel lore of that universe and for a marvel fic is not a Harem(which adds a lot of brownie points) its kinda soon to make a proper review but so far so good, now we only need to wait for peter to became spiderman and see how this univere and the spiderman society react to him, but there is no rush to get there.

Yes it. Good

Just no, it was good at first, but now it's just unreadable trash

Story is decent. Mc powers suck. the humor is mediocre and can't cover up how many illogical events have already happened. I guess if a joke is added at the end its supposed to distract us from that. give it a read and judge for yourself.

This is literally a crackhead fic.

This reads like the author wanted to create his own Butchered version of The Perfect Run.