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Giga_Weeb
Giga_WeebLv21yr
2023-06-30 00:43

Good story. caveat being it's ruined by a weird, arrogant mc who has too much handed to him on a platter. Creeping hunger for a goldfinger was insane much less how redundant it is immediately made. Author is clearly new to writing but capable of good plotlines and executing them. Struggles however with believable character settings, interactions and writing a likeable mc. I think I can look forward to reading your work in a couple years author.

Spider-Verse: Creeping Hunger

_oinkchan
4.5
61 Chs

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_oinkchan
_oinkchanAuthor

I'm not that new to writing 💀. In a few years, I hope not to write for incels on wn.

1yr
Kapuchinik
KapuchinikLv5

Hope is the only thing you can have on this…

_oinkchan:I'm not that new to writing 💀. In a few years, I hope not to write for incels on wn.
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_oinkchan
_oinkchanAuthor

Truly

Kapuchinik:Hope is the only thing you can have on this…
1yr
Little_El
Little_ElLv3

Dude! It was brutal ☠️

Kapuchinik:Hope is the only thing you can have on this…
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Unknown_Stranger22
Unknown_Stranger22Lv3

If your writing skill improved greatly u can consider writing novels on royalroad.its where good novel are written unlike wn.u also would't get 1 star review just because ur mc a girl or any stupid reason like on wn.most review are quit fair and really good.it show that the reviewer actually read and try to understand the story

_oinkchan:I'm not that new to writing 💀. In a few years, I hope not to write for incels on wn.
1yr
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_oinkchan
_oinkchanAuthor

Thank you

Unknown_Stranger22:If your writing skill improved greatly u can consider writing novels on royalroad.its where good novel are written unlike wn.u also would't get 1 star review just because ur mc a girl or any stupid reason like on wn.most review are quit fair and really good.it show that the reviewer actually read and try to understand the story
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Kiyan_Tribe
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Hello author, I was looking for some good Spider Man fics and you came as my savior 🙂. Also I would like to see MC in Spider-Verse movies and Spider Man: No Way Home. Hope you continue Oink-chan, love your stories ❤

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InternetSaint
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This story just feels strange, like I am being trapped inside the brain of a st*pid person.

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MC is incredibly awkward and has a tendency to behave like an idiot, despite his supposed intelligence. The weird maggot-glove is seriously edgy, cringe and overall a pointless addition to the story, that doesn't really add anything to the story. The MC also acts like a psycho sometimes. He just casually decides to buy pets and cut off their limbs, just to test the Lizard formula. He doesn't seem to hesitate about that decision either.

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Jackoftrades
JackoftradesLv3

The OC is boring and weird. The charcaters themselves are all awkward. The only time it’s not too awkward is when the OC and Gwen were flirting but before and after that the characters just seem bland. Also when the OC does show personality it’s incredibly childish and cringe. For the most part there is no spelling or grammar errors. The updating stability is top tier. However after that everything else kind of just falls flat. I dropped at chapter 21 but maybe I’ll come back when there’s more chapters and see if my mind will be changed.

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Kakatua
KakatuaLv1

As well written as this is done, it really isn't my cup of tea more than anything because of the Mc's personality, until now ch 4 or 5 where I leave him, he seems like an average jerk highly competent at everything with apparent problems empathizing . I can't criticize much since it's just the beginning of the novel but I don't think I'll continue reading because I don't like Mc

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