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Jackoftrades
JackoftradesLv31yr
2023-06-30 14:02

The OC is boring and weird. The charcaters themselves are all awkward. The only time it’s not too awkward is when the OC and Gwen were flirting but before and after that the characters just seem bland. Also when the OC does show personality it’s incredibly childish and cringe. For the most part there is no spelling or grammar errors. The updating stability is top tier. However after that everything else kind of just falls flat. I dropped at chapter 21 but maybe I’ll come back when there’s more chapters and see if my mind will be changed.

Spider-Verse: Creeping Hunger

_oinkchan
4.5
61 Chs

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_oinkchan
_oinkchanAuthor

How many characters have been shown yet? Barely can be counted on 5 fingers. How many days have passed since bc transmigrated? 3 or 4. If you drop it's your choice and if you don't read, it's still your choice, it personally doesn't make a difference to me since I have many more readers. The reason why you find oc weird and boring is due to the personality difference between the two of you. Maybe you can't relate and it's how it should be. Oc was after all a rich guy from high society, getting everything he wants, money, women... everything only to get forcefully transmigrated into a loser. If you were from high society, maybe you wouldn't find him weird, I can't help in that. Thanks for the review and for reading my fanfic till here. Appreciate it.

1yr
Jackoftrades
JackoftradesLv3

You okay?

_oinkchan:How many characters have been shown yet? Barely can be counted on 5 fingers. How many days have passed since bc transmigrated? 3 or 4. If you drop it's your choice and if you don't read, it's still your choice, it personally doesn't make a difference to me since I have many more readers. The reason why you find oc weird and boring is due to the personality difference between the two of you. Maybe you can't relate and it's how it should be. Oc was after all a rich guy from high society, getting everything he wants, money, women... everything only to get forcefully transmigrated into a loser. If you were from high society, maybe you wouldn't find him weird, I can't help in that. Thanks for the review and for reading my fanfic till here. Appreciate it.
1yr
5
_oinkchan
_oinkchanAuthor

Perfectly okay. How bout you?

Jackoftrades:You okay?
1yr
Jackoftrades
JackoftradesLv3

Yeah I’m good. You just seemed passive aggressive and frustrated so I was wondering. Hope you have a good one.

_oinkchan:Perfectly okay. How bout you?
1yr
10
_oinkchan
_oinkchanAuthor

I was not being passive-aggressive. It's the truth. Hope you have a good day too.

Jackoftrades:Yeah I’m good. You just seemed passive aggressive and frustrated so I was wondering. Hope you have a good one.
1yr
Artem_5195
Artem_5195Lv2

are you going to keep writing your fanfiction?

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Arcibo
ArciboLv15

Will you ever finish your opm MHA novel

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mow
mowLv4

"The updating stability is toptier" 💀💀

1yr
Carlos_2757
Carlos_2757Lv3

🙂🙂🙃🙃🫣🫣

_oinkchan:I was not being passive-aggressive. It's the truth. Hope you have a good day too.
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