DetachedDreamer

chapters like this, watching pre-determined fights go on and just criticism from the MC or companions are so boring. time for another chapter about affirming our superiority. lol let's talk about spider man's weakness. and repeat it 12 times to make sure our audience knows.

For a moment I thought it was going to be great. but the translation is horrible. There are foreign words that obviously have no meaning in English and instead of finding an alternative he just translate the word, leaving us with confusion. words like Ink, Fark, and calling folk yellow. either make no sense or are just distasteful. translator had no regard for this. it ruins the story completely. and once you get to Gotham it just gets worse. trying to school batman. lol I can't believe the translator likes this story. obviously written by the scum of the earth and since it wasn't cleansed of its filth it must be because the translator appreciates it. tells me what I need to know. I wish it was just laziness. The MC is a reflection of the author. mentality of a boy who's never had friends or a gf but thinks he knows better than fictional geniuses and powerhouses. using whats learned in hindsight after reading comics to feel superior over those heroes even tho they don't have the luxury to do the same. thats insane and its creepy. lol this translator agrees with the author. again, thats all I need to know. lol what a mess.

batman's just a human. so are you. why is a joke like you acting high and mighty, insisting you'd tell batman anything. lol sit down. you're weak and just canon fodder. know your place.

why add ink at all? ruins the story. Chinese fanfic writers are the scum of the earth. if you're going to translate it then cleanse it of its filth. or you're just as much to blame for the shitty writing as the OG is.

the laziest

wait so this version of him does arguably worse than the og version did? then cried about it. nah, he had other options. fake ass tears. man up and move on. killed a mother dragon for sport. lol there's no crying about it after.

and thats a wrap for me. I saw it coming but wanted to be wrong. good luck with the story.

if our world had magic pokemon in it then the fundamental laws of our universe would be different. if our universe was magical nothing would be the same so calling it realistic makes no sense. who says with magic we wouldn't all just be happy drunk on magic and live forever in peace? the math aint mathin because we don't have one variable to work with thats fact. realistic. thats a perspective of people who lived a sad life. mines been very happy so that should be a realistic version right? but how can both be? yall need to stop using the world realistic. it's lost its meaning. Just call it an AU and stop peddling whats "real" in a fantasy world. lol its a fanfic. nothing is more or less real in a fanfic. thats just a funny construct created to feel justified about writing something dark.

dialogue makes no sense

so the synopsis makes this out to be a 50 shades of grey but with supernaturals.