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Brandon_Geo
Brandon_GeoLv31yr
2023-06-19 11:43

There is no way this story isn’t botted. 1. As of right now, there is literally no story. 2. The writing is sometimes weird. It feels like a translation. 3. The premise isn’t bad, but eventually it becomes a “inconsequential self-insert power trip.”

Spider-Verse: Creeping Hunger

_oinkchan
4.5
61 Chs

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Zuziel
ZuzielLv3

Wdym no story? Haven't started yet but reviews say it isn't so bad aside from the weird writing

1yr
4
_oinkchan
_oinkchanAuthor

The writing ain't even weird, these guys are just the negative dudes on wn who like to annoy authors. Don't pay them attention.

Zuziel:Wdym no story? Haven't started yet but reviews say it isn't so bad aside from the weird writing
1yr
21
Ivan_Smirnov
Ivan_SmirnovLv1

Man, at the start u create this parasyte, but dont use it untill now maybe just delete that part and MC will only use his mind to become more stronger

_oinkchan:The writing ain't even weird, these guys are just the negative dudes on wn who like to annoy authors. Don't pay them attention.
1yr
16
Apex_Predator_420
Apex_Predator_420Lv1

No dude your story telling is kinda weird but it is funny....sometimes.

_oinkchan:The writing ain't even weird, these guys are just the negative dudes on wn who like to annoy authors. Don't pay them attention.
1yr
8
Aaron1002
Aaron1002Lv1

Have you even read your novel? The writing is weird and wonky.

_oinkchan:The writing ain't even weird, these guys are just the negative dudes on wn who like to annoy authors. Don't pay them attention.
1yr
10
Archonstine
ArchonstineLv5

Dude, learn to accept some criticism. As an Eng Lit major, your dialogues are extremely wooden, and there is no consistency in the behaviour of your characters. The plot is cartoonish, and character development of mc is unreal, and not in a good way. The only reason I didn't post a 2 star review was cause I couldn't be bothered to do so. The sole motivation of this rant was your uncaring and frankly outrageous reply. So next time, either delete the review, or ignore it.

_oinkchan:The writing ain't even weird, these guys are just the negative dudes on wn who like to annoy authors. Don't pay them attention.
1yr
41
noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv14

Lol, try re reading your story

_oinkchan:The writing ain't even weird, these guys are just the negative dudes on wn who like to annoy authors. Don't pay them attention.
1yr
9
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ODlUM
ODlUMLv4

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TyrantTron335
TyrantTron335Lv11

Oi, Oinkchan I thought your hand was paralyzed by mobile shock.

1yr
Otaku_Gamer_00007
Otaku_Gamer_00007Lv4

1st CH undesirable, Unbearable hot mess like bro just re-read it some time latter it's Plain cringe in the most potent state of matter

1yr
EvilBlueCrystal
EvilBlueCrystalLv1

The plot makes absolutely no sense, the protagonist doesn't have a backstory, there's no characters, no logic. Some unreadable events put together without a reason.

1yr
Kiyan_Tribe
Kiyan_TribeLv13

Hello author, I was looking for some good Spider Man fics and you came as my savior 🙂. Also I would like to see MC in Spider-Verse movies and Spider Man: No Way Home. Hope you continue Oink-chan, love your stories ❤

1yr
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

This story just feels strange, like I am being trapped inside the brain of a st*pid person.

1yr
Alchemist
AlchemistLv13

MC is incredibly awkward and has a tendency to behave like an idiot, despite his supposed intelligence. The weird maggot-glove is seriously edgy, cringe and overall a pointless addition to the story, that doesn't really add anything to the story. The MC also acts like a psycho sometimes. He just casually decides to buy pets and cut off their limbs, just to test the Lizard formula. He doesn't seem to hesitate about that decision either.

1yr
Jackoftrades
JackoftradesLv3

The OC is boring and weird. The charcaters themselves are all awkward. The only time it’s not too awkward is when the OC and Gwen were flirting but before and after that the characters just seem bland. Also when the OC does show personality it’s incredibly childish and cringe. For the most part there is no spelling or grammar errors. The updating stability is top tier. However after that everything else kind of just falls flat. I dropped at chapter 21 but maybe I’ll come back when there’s more chapters and see if my mind will be changed.

1yr
Kakatua
KakatuaLv1

As well written as this is done, it really isn't my cup of tea more than anything because of the Mc's personality, until now ch 4 or 5 where I leave him, he seems like an average jerk highly competent at everything with apparent problems empathizing . I can't criticize much since it's just the beginning of the novel but I don't think I'll continue reading because I don't like Mc

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