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EvilBlueCrystal
EvilBlueCrystalLv11yr
2023-06-19 18:50

The plot makes absolutely no sense, the protagonist doesn't have a backstory, there's no characters, no logic. Some unreadable events put together without a reason.

Spider-Verse: Creeping Hunger

_oinkchan
4.5
61 Chs

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pratiksymbol
pratiksymbolLv4

This review literally makes no sense.

1yr
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Lustful_Flesh
Lustful_FleshLv4

this guy's acc history is only bad reviews, don't trust him.

pratiksymbol:This review literally makes no sense.
1yr
6
Pxzmen
PxzmenLv1

this guy rate 1-3 star every novel he read don't trust this man

1yr
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Juhiko
JuhikoLv6

like the story

pratiksymbol:This review literally makes no sense.
1yr
5
_Bruh
_BruhLv13

nah a degen would like this story rather than dislike it

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1yr
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Thorn_Vale
Thorn_ValeLv2

Character has no backstory? Bro search gherman sparrow he is mc of another novel called lord of the mysteries

1yr
1
_Bruh
_BruhLv13

then the author shouldve made it clearer

Thorn_Vale:Character has no backstory? Bro search gherman sparrow he is mc of another novel called lord of the mysteries
1yr
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THIZZGATOR
THIZZGATORLv4

you do much stalking through others profile? If so I'd recommend disconnecting from the internet for a while cause that isnt something a healthy minded individual should do.

Lustful_Flesh:this guy's acc history is only bad reviews, don't trust him.
1yr
Lustful_Flesh
Lustful_FleshLv4

... i remember seeing him 5 other times honestly, so I checked his account. Bruh so me checking the acc of someone who I kept seeing bad reviews of is 'stalking'.is it bad to be curious?

THIZZGATOR:you do much stalking through others profile? If so I'd recommend disconnecting from the internet for a while cause that isnt something a healthy minded individual should do.
1yr
THIZZGATOR
THIZZGATORLv4

tiny bit yeah. At the very least keep your voyarism to yourself.

Lustful_Flesh:... i remember seeing him 5 other times honestly, so I checked his account. Bruh so me checking the acc of someone who I kept seeing bad reviews of is 'stalking'.is it bad to be curious?
1yr
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TyrantTron335Lv12

Oi, Oinkchan I thought your hand was paralyzed by mobile shock.

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Brandon_Geo
Brandon_GeoLv3

There is no way this story isn’t botted. 1. As of right now, there is literally no story. 2. The writing is sometimes weird. It feels like a translation. 3. The premise isn’t bad, but eventually it becomes a “inconsequential self-insert power trip.”

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Otaku_Gamer_00007
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1st CH undesirable, Unbearable hot mess like bro just re-read it some time latter it's Plain cringe in the most potent state of matter

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Kiyan_Tribe
Kiyan_TribeLv13

Hello author, I was looking for some good Spider Man fics and you came as my savior 🙂. Also I would like to see MC in Spider-Verse movies and Spider Man: No Way Home. Hope you continue Oink-chan, love your stories ❤

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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

This story just feels strange, like I am being trapped inside the brain of a st*pid person.

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Alchemist
AlchemistLv13

MC is incredibly awkward and has a tendency to behave like an idiot, despite his supposed intelligence. The weird maggot-glove is seriously edgy, cringe and overall a pointless addition to the story, that doesn't really add anything to the story. The MC also acts like a psycho sometimes. He just casually decides to buy pets and cut off their limbs, just to test the Lizard formula. He doesn't seem to hesitate about that decision either.

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Jackoftrades
JackoftradesLv3

The OC is boring and weird. The charcaters themselves are all awkward. The only time it’s not too awkward is when the OC and Gwen were flirting but before and after that the characters just seem bland. Also when the OC does show personality it’s incredibly childish and cringe. For the most part there is no spelling or grammar errors. The updating stability is top tier. However after that everything else kind of just falls flat. I dropped at chapter 21 but maybe I’ll come back when there’s more chapters and see if my mind will be changed.

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Kakatua
KakatuaLv1

As well written as this is done, it really isn't my cup of tea more than anything because of the Mc's personality, until now ch 4 or 5 where I leave him, he seems like an average jerk highly competent at everything with apparent problems empathizing . I can't criticize much since it's just the beginning of the novel but I don't think I'll continue reading because I don't like Mc

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