As well written as this is done, it really isn't my cup of tea more than anything because of the Mc's personality, until now ch 4 or 5 where I leave him, he seems like an average jerk highly competent at everything with apparent problems empathizing . I can't criticize much since it's just the beginning of the novel but I don't think I'll continue reading because I don't like Mc
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Don't you think you shouldn't write a review then? Since you have only read 5 chaps and are projecting your personal insecurities?
Thanks for the review though. I appreciate it.
Normally I would agree but the novel is only 14 ch 5/14 is more than 33%. They are not insecurities either, it is simply a set of factors / tastes that do not agree with mine and that make reading about the Mc not pleasant for me, such as: I like animals and I feel empathy towards them, I do not like drugs nor the people who eat a lot of junk food and expect to have a good physique by magic, besides that the Mc becomes an expert scientist in a couple of hours also seems strange to me. I understand that he has an IQ of 250, but even with the grades, shouldn't it have taken him at least a couple of days to be able to do something that even the Peter who spent years studying failed? Of course, there is character development and all this could change, although it doesn't seem like it will in the end, it's just my personal preferences. but as someone who also wants to write I understand that you don't like unconstructive reviews
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Also I forgot to mention buy of course you probably skim read in the fanfic. Mc's physique has absolutely no changes. No abs, no sudden increase in height. He even registered in a gym to work on his body.
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