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Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack

Author: FanficMortal
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An ordinary soul from Earth mysteriously transmigrates into One Piece World. What's more, he was presented with a Gift Pack from God. Follow his journey, from being a slave to an extraordinary existence that everyone fears.

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Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 :One Piece - Rise

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Review after chapter 85 {>°<} This story is near painfully average. The MC is average, his DF is supposedly super OP but only at endgame but so is potentially any DF. His only other power, which could potentially grant him near godly powers after some training, is nerfed to oblivion and he's only slight toucher skinned with a healing factor. His talent is average for someone meant for New World, I'd say his talent is below Luffy by 50%. He spends 4-6 years doing what Luffy did in 2-3. And in a meta perspective, he doesn't have anything unique about him. His situation is average for someone going thru marine training in the Elite course with contrarian ambitions. He is constantly punished for slights against the WG but basically accepts it, making excuses that with his System, he can cope. Which is true, but it doesn't mean he has to lose gains because of corrupt marines! This MC is too honest but without the plot armor rewards. His Conquerer's Haki is undeserved because, despite it being strong, he doesn't really show the qualities of a King. He really lacks the natural charisma to have a good crew/support base etc. His CH is awakened by a random trick while he has no clue about the there two. It's pretty embarrassing for an Isekai person imo. He doesn't really use future knowledge other than as a Pokedex, ooing and aaing when meeting famous characters. Sure he saves Kuina but that girl isn't important at all other than in fanfiction. Finally, his face is too average! Seriously, no sign of a romantic interest in almost 90 chapters. The barely a thing with Gion was cut by small betrayal and separation and it almost feels like he things of nothing but fighting and food. He's like discount Goku, the discounts being the paragraphs above.

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