Tyr25

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Exactly, it’s like the other players are invisible on the field, which doesn’t even make sense. The author made the MC way op, and it’s starting to get boring predictable, Shinichi does this and does that all other players besides Noa spectates and wows lol

Yeah, the MC is everywhere lol, and his teammates are missing as usual. I know Blue Lock isn’t realistic, but the MC in this fic is even more unrealistic

I'm just sharing my honest opinion because this fanfic is genuinely good and your writing is solid. I understand that you want to develop every character and build things up properly, but it feels like you're overdoing it. It's been months since the your fanfic started and we're still nowhere near the Inter-High arc. How much longer will it take before we finally reach the main meat of the plot? The slice-of-life parts are enjoyable—don’t get me wrong, I like what you write—but as a reader it’s starting to get frustrating because the pacing is extremely slow, and the long gaps between updates make it feel even slower. One chapter focuses on his day, love letter, and friends at school, then after waiting three days for the next update we get another classroom scene with no real plot progression besides Alya getting jealous while the MC still isn’t doing anything

Yeah, this chapter feels like filler and the author is just padding words. You can skip it without missing anything. I also thought this was going to be a Blue Lock fanfic, but at this rate we’re not even getting close to the canon. It’s turning into a rom-com fanfic instead.

i agree, the pacing is really slow, and the update schedule makes it feel even slower

Let the author write what he wants, but I do have a nitpick—developing other characters is fine, but the story’s pacing right now is really slow. I could skip this chapter and not miss anything important. I’ll still read it because the author is actually one of the few decent writers here in Webnovel.