Demon Slayer : The Silent Journey

I was late to the Demon Slayer hype train. I binged it a few days ago while I had my holiday and I couldn't get it out of my mind. I searched for fanfics to stiate my need to get more but was disappointed to see there were barely any, and the existing are all dropped or only part of a multiversal story. Then it hit me, I am a fanfic Author, so I wrote this. Halfway writing the ten chapter, I realized why most of the Demon Slayer fanfic were dropped but I take it as a challenge so expect this to be completed. The main priority in my project is still MTADW so this book update might be a bit slow sometimes but hopefully you will get 5 chapters every week. If you are reader of my previous book, I hope you try this one. My latest works are always the best because I keep improving. The book will have slice of life moments and character interactions, especially the Hashiras as that was why I even felt the need for a fanfic in the first place. We didn't have enough Hashira screen time Well, what else can I say except let me cook🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥. I hope I don't get one spar spam again this time.

Biwa best girl. Justice for Daki. Protection for mother spider.

I’ve only just noticed who you are and what you’ve already so I’m excited for this. Does this have romance

Overall, comparing this to the author's previous fanfic, More Than A Dragon Warrior, what happened? This feels like a step down in quality. The Good: We have an original MC in a fan-fic, yay! The author is kind enough to offer this for free and updates it regularly! The chapters are long and I am impressed the author can keep up the pace of releases. The Bad: The tenses are switching too rapidly, making it a chore to follow and beginning almost every chapter with (Seiji's POV) hurts my soul. I understand wanting to pump out a story, but all of the unnecessary punctuation line breaks and weirdly inserted tags just feel like speed bumps. The Neutral: It's not long enough to give it a truly good review yet, though, but Demon Slayer is hard to do. The Demon Slayer characters from the anime are (usually) very simple and this works for Demon Slayer. If you only use the anime as a source, you're going to have to fill in a lot of the blanks on your own. Thankfully, we have an original MC but I can't help but seem him as a Tanjiro 2.0. I think that is my fault though since I was not really able to connect with this.

Great execution of a concept of power that is underdone because of lack of creativity or simply sometimes lack of thought. I won't spoil it here because that is major plot point in the story so it'd be better if you read it for yourself. The only star I've deducted is in the stability of updates criteria, I would like more chapters and not because of simple greed, the updates are genuinely quite slow and I personally think slow updates, especially at the start, hurt the potential of a story because of simply the fact that it is in these first chapters that people start to connect with the story and judge the story. Out of sight, Out of mind kinda of a deal. I have no issue with writing of the story till now(14 Chapters in, which I know is a short time but that is why I have highlighted this issue here).

I'm afraid to read stories from an author who has worked with NTR (Yes, I'm already traumatized), but I really liked this one so I'll give it a chance 👍🏻

Dude made “more than a dragon warrior” the greatest thing I’ve read so I’m gonna have at bare minimum a good read

i will wait till it gets more chapter. i hope you dont add ntr shit like your previous works living with author, it was promising novel yet you add blackmail ntr shit to it :)

Patreon gang representing, very good so far

Started reading this cuz I was looking for some new fanfics and yeah, it's cool. It feels a little weird, but like in a good way, or maybe unique is the word, It feels fresh is what I'm getting at. I would absolutely give it a try, The only negative i see is that there aren't enough chapters to read.

Really good plot with giving the mc one power for deficiency which makes him not op like other demon slayer works. I just hope u can make him a bit battle lust type who slaughters demon brutally just my personal preference

Absolutely amazing so far. Author never disappoints with content quality in general, just hope this fic goes far, really far. Looking forward to more. 08/11/24

Right now there isn't anything big to complain about. The fights are great. Characters are portrayed faithfully to the originals. Story feels fast-paced but not rushed. With enough space for rest, development and relationships. Now spoilers. And for me that means complaints: - MC feels inconsistent. In his previous world he was a 13 years old, deaf and orphaned boy, not really loved by anyone and so, like every orphaned child, he knows 12 languages, knows quite a bit about history and even had time to read books and manga. xDD - Sometimes it feels like our guy isn't deaf. He knows how to read lips and so can communicate BUT, he was speaking with a swordsmith that has mask on. He shouldn't be able to red his lips. Often in those moments author just writes something like "He knew because of his throat vibrations". It feels like a little bit too much. Even more so as that was used on Hand Demon whose neck was hidden by his hands, just as his mouth. Those aren't really that bad, but I feel like that kills a little bit MC's individuality. Instead of a lifehack like that it might actually be better to to just let MC not hear sometimes. Just think about it, MC doesn't hear the demon and so the demon becomes more and more enraged because of that, or combining the silence with MC's creepy eyes and Demon gets gradually more and more scared, usually familiar with screams of his prey now he fears for his life because of silence

one of the best demon slayer fanfics I have read. this is top tier. don't miss this fanfic. I love how the action scenes are composed. I would recommend this fanfic

i love this fanfic the way the author phrase every sentence and word is just wonderful easy to understand the way the writing express crisp and clear emotions about the story its amazing fully fleshed out no plot holes so far no world travel bullshit just another pov of a what if character reborn with normal background no cheat or op system just talent and sheer will i mean bruh didn't even know he was in the demon slayer world until a fate full night you might think the cheat is his transparent world bullshit but the clearly explain that he got the talent in his og world with lip reading and was just enhance when he was reborn being deaf and all. and it was explain that the talent wag not born it was created being deaf and having experience reading the body language of how people act he just hone this to perfection also ty author haven't read a good fanfic in a while no system no world hoping nonsense just another demon slayer with fresh perspective of the world around it 🥰🥰🥰

This is a great story keep up the good work please let it be a harem consisting of mitsuri daki shinobu kanae kanao nezuko and aoi

Reveal spoiler

I was first off put by the harem tag, but I decided not to judge once in a while and not let go of a story just for the tag. But it was definitely worth it. It started off pretty well. It had the sad backstory of why the MC wants to become a demon slayer and the progression is well spent. We don't see any training sequence, which is good or else it's boring. The MC is basically a mirror where he can copy breathing style with enough practice. His character development is very interesting to me. I like the outlooks that he has on demons. No mercy, just kill them all. His character grows with each character he meets. Overall, it is a very good story with balance dialogue and action.

Great story and excellent way to articulate how the breath system works. Also I love that you are creative enough to not give him a system. I’m sick of that cliche. 5 star for you my boi.[img=update][img=update][img=update]

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