Item: Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack
Rating: 1
Author: Amir_Blumenfeld

Amir_BlumenfeldLv43yr

2022-03-03 18:20

was a great novel until, 160 chapters in, the author suddenly decided to make it into a crossover by sending the mc to the hunterxhunter universe, and putting in the authors note that the mc would stay there for 30-40 chapters... since i've never seen hunterxhunter i obviously dropped the story, but even if i had seen it i'd still give 1 start since it's pretty f*cked up to just suddenly make it a crossover without giving any warning to the readers, or even putting a crossover tag on the novel.

Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack

FanficMortal

4.6

277 Chs

Liked by 43 people

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nonsense review!

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Author's shameless 5-star review. Some things about the story and plot, ~It's a One Piece fan-fic with good story building and strength progression from weak to strong. ~MC's strength will soar after a small time-skip which will be around the 70th chapter. ~There's a possibility of MC crossing to the Naruto realm. It's just my thought, I haven't planned it yet. ~There will be no harem. Happy Reading Everyone!!

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It a good story. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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