Brett_Knox

Novel magic system thus far, slow pacing but thats ideal for me. some of the wording is confusing at times but overall its decent.

its solid so far, i hope you actually stay consistent. the biggest thing I've seen is alot of authors get burnt out & lose some direction in the novel or drop it. make sure to pace your efforts reasonably. overall, seems interesting.

The drag would be higher than the force from gravity even at a perfectly down angle since its likely past its max terminal velocity ( from pure gravitational pull alone) . it wouldn't be accelerating.

Obito also teleports places

the flying thunder god thing Minato does is teleportation which is faster than light.

There's a fanfic out there with a similar premise that I can't remember the name of. the difference is that the mc enters different movie universes instead. at one point the mc enters the terminator universe and gets a terminator arm, in another he meets Jack sparrow.who had max charisma and luck stats. if you could lmk the name ide greatly appreciate it.

potatoes

my only negative is the overuse of "oh," I find it ruins the flow of the writing a bit. otherwise, this is a wonderful read :).

wonderful novel , worth reading. does anyone know where to find the 48 hours per day fanfic where the mc has the same abilities and general plot but is inserted into doffernt movies. I typed it into gpt and it said it was by coder_x but I can't find it. lmk 🙏 🙏 🙏