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bitchlasagna
bitchlasagnaLv33yr
2021-06-15 23:40

bad writing and execution MC- my goal is for marine and world gov separation and destruction of w.g......few chapters later MC-heaven defying strength, how dare celestial dragon talk back to me, i will kill everyone, sakazuki? lets blatantly provoke him now that i have no haki and no actual power

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Morpheus146
Morpheus146Lv4

Sayandeimon
SayandeimonLv3

Analiza mejor la historia, porque por lo que parece lo leíste de corrido sin tratar de comprender el idealismo del prota.

Artem_Lavrov
Artem_LavrovLv1

this is the base

Jessie_Morris_3187
Jessie_Morris_3187Lv13

F you this chapter is amazing

bitchlasagna
bitchlasagnaLv3

I pity you, what horrible atrocities you must have read before to consider this garbage amazing

Jessie_Morris_3187:F you this chapter is amazing
Jessie_Morris_3187
Jessie_Morris_3187Lv13

f you and your family you don't know art

bitchlasagna:I pity you, what horrible atrocities you must have read before to consider this garbage amazing
Ghost_D_writer_
Ghost_D_writer_Lv12

soo true this is very cringe story with stupidest mc ever..---- mc is---- justice lover , battle maniac(in worst possible way who always dies almost),huge emotional idiot who can't control emotion, very weak but talks big,always say he will kill celestrial but when target by them he shows mercy and only warns them,story is flat predictable with stupid author.....and mc is too much disappointment

Genn_stars
Genn_starsLv3

Art is subjective.

Jessie_Morris_3187:f you and your family you don't know art
NoobLord114
NoobLord114Lv6

lol 🤣 this is worse than even garbage

Jessie_Morris_3187:f you and your family you don't know art
Veasna_TDM
Veasna_TDMLv11

Agree, and that was the transition into HxH world, that why author write it like that, but it very sad, when author keep praising the mc are op, rightious, etc, but when it matter, the mc have to take a lose for the plot, getting nerf, character break, and all the negative necessary for it. It just ruined a story, and I seen it a lot in webnovel outside Chinese one. Not saying that Chinese novel are better, they are not. It just bad, when author put the mc in such a high expectation in the beginning to get reader hooked, but disappointed reader in later chapter.

Ghost_D_writer_:soo true this is very cringe story with stupidest mc ever..---- mc is---- justice lover , battle maniac(in worst possible way who always dies almost),huge emotional idiot who can't control emotion, very weak but talks big,always say he will kill celestrial but when target by them he shows mercy and only warns them,story is flat predictable with stupid author.....and mc is too much disappointment
GRV
GRVLv4

I wish I had read this review before reading so many chapters. The story overall is really good and had a lot of potential. I keep reading more chapters to give it a chance but the MC keeps ruining it. He is just simply unlikeable. Also author keeps nerfing mc after all the training he does. He either wins easily or barely able to surive. There is no in between. It is so frustrating..

sixpathsofsimp
sixpathsofsimpLv4

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