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The Black Tower: A Journey of Revenge" is a gripping tale of adventure and determination, as Matthew sets out to avenge his loved ones and bring an end to the dark forces that plague the Rosendar continent. The author skillfully weaves multiple character perspectives, creating a rich and dynamic world that keeps readers engaged and invested in the story

Read four chapters as of now. The setup, the opening high-stakes battle, and the dilemma of the lead, everything is neatly done and makes the reader intrigued throughout. My only gripe is the dialogues that are mildly artificial and expository, especially the dialogues spoken when the characters are on the verge of death. But other than that it is a fairly engaging story with a terrific start. Congrats! Will be visiting this often to see how the rest of the story is treated.

The way the author describes the characters is fantastic. Author, keep continuing. Excellent writing and a compelling plot. I think the characters' development has been good. And the way it keeps the reader interested makes it enjoyable to read for a long time. I find it unable to look away from this book because it appears too spectacular to be true.

Not gonna lie, writing needs some sort of improvement. At some point it just felt like information dumping, the author is not trying to show the story. The pacing was good and overall I liked where the story was going. I liked how author put those notes after every chapter, telling us small stuffs and all that, it was good good. Just wan to say Good luck author.

Novel is jam-packed with excellent details, developed characters, and an intriguing power system. The world-building and interactions between characters are exceptional. I'm glad I gave this story a chance because it was a thrill and well thought out. There's a lot to unpack in the first 20 chapters that only get better as more events unfold. Main OC is sharp despite his young age and has to overcome many hurdles to accomplish his goal. This is an excellent read! 5/5

Author bro keep writing you're doing well writing well and doing great job gonna read it very soon 😩❤

Never read this kind of concept before... Really amazed by the story... It has action, advanture everything needed in a cool story which everyone will fall in love very quickly.... It needed some improvements but as the story is so awesome and so it won't bother readers more.... All the best....

this story is such an excellent work of art.. just in love with the protagonist characters and for the black tower crew i don't like the way they destroy innocent lives but i seem to love these villians anyways. their action, and aura provokes and also intimidate the victim ones to make moves.

I am marvelled by your work. The detailed explanation of everything going on. I was hooked. Keep up the good work author............☺[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

The story is great! I really liked the exposition at the beginning, and then the sudden jump into the action. I could see that it was a bit hard for you to write a child's mind until you got used to it, though even now, Matthew seems a bit too odd for a child, off-putting, even counting the horrors he faced. I don't like Asvin much, when I imagine him, he comes up along with the image of a slug. But I really like Rania, she's like a flower. I'm interested to see what happens next, so this is surely going into my library for keeping it! Also, the only reason I'm not giving you full 5 stars is the amount of commas you're using. I know of people who don't use enough commas and have too long sentences, but you? There's a comma every three words. I caught myself reading it like a broken google voice. XD

Read a few chapter and its going well and not Everytime you get novel on magic on a scale of 10 I'd give it a 8/10 since I'm just starting and all is one definitely recommending this on my social apps

The world building is great. The plot is amazing. The characters are quite interesting. Though I have to say the number of commas you use can be quite distracting. But I think this will be a good read.

The writing style can be a bit passive at times but the drama of the plot shines through it just fine! The characters are quite interesting and the world's descriptions built a nice vibe for the story! Keep up the good work

Very nice writing perhaps. Although with a lot of commas, its easy to understand what is going on in the story. The plot so far is at its best.