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Not gonna lie, writing needs some sort of improvement. At some point it just felt like information dumping, the author is not trying to show the story. The pacing was good and overall I liked where the story was going. I liked how author put those notes after every chapter, telling us small stuffs and all that, it was good good. Just wan to say Good luck author.
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not Grammar my dear author. When you write a story you should not tell it or simply state it, you should show it. The readers should get a vivid image of what's happening. that's what I am talking about
Redmonitor:Do you mean the grammar? Or only the info dumps?