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Well. . . every book needs the right grammar, doesn't matter what type of book it is. While I could be wrong, from what I see, English isn't your first language (based on the lack of commas in your response), so I would say to maybe use Grammarly. From my experience, it does really well in using correct grammar.
This is just a shameless review from me here. I believe this book is going to be really enjoyable for you. For me, the soon-coming 2nd volume is much better than the first. This first volume is meant to set the scene for the things going forward, so if you wanna join the ride me with me, I'd be eternally grateful.
This book, if edited to make the writing feel more complete, would be an absolute ride to read. No doubt about it. The development is really balanced and nice.